My Love

you are the nectar

in a paralleled dimension

my love expands with the universe 

like a butterfly it flutters in my heart

it takes flight, it has wings, it releases me

it floats over the moon like luminary fireflies

playing in a sweet melody of pears and violins

i dance in the shadows of nymphets and angels

 lips lick the ambrosia of gods and worldly idols

my eyes see the hopes of childlike innocence 

I hear the music of daffodils as they linger

my love brings joy of poppies to my heart

peace of nightingales to my soul

my love expands

 because 

of

 you

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

It looks like a bee's butt, which makes me smile wide...because you left off the stinger ;-) There are times when we just need to sit back on our haunches and assess the situation...and thank our lucky stars you did not leave us looking for the boo-boo bands. This is optimistic and...well...nice. Bumble bee my heart more often, ma'am ;-)

[Frieda P]

haha a bee's butt! Was going for sweet nectar, perhaps a peachy world...but a honey bee without a stinger would cut it too! Consider your heart bumbled. :-)

[KAOlmsted]

:-D xoxo

[Night]

now if this had been in the shape of a butterfly...just kidding...neato...:)

[Frieda P]

hahaha you know I had thought of that but it's near impossible!!

[writing mojo]

now this took a lot of time and thought, wow!
your great in your growing periods of life
and the fruit shape of this piece is just another great another leveler i have yet to experience..amazing

[LA Lorena]

cool. looks like a giant Christmas ornament. I'm noticing a lot of poppies in your poetry of late.

[Frieda P]

Is that good? ;-)

[LA Lorena]

it's just an observation, not negative or positive. Unless it denotes some fascination or dependence on opiates.

[Frieda P]

hahah that's what I thought you insinuating....

[LA Lorena]

LOL, I can't help noticing things like that.

[Frieda P]

Can't slip anything past you, were you a bloodhound or PI in your last life? By the way, I was going for an alternate universe with that xmas ball! ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Holy cow Frieda, how in the world did you do this so quick? :P It would quite possibly take me a week to do something like this haha...this is really beautiful though, it brought a smile to my face ;)

[Frieda P]

I started writing it earlier at work, I needed to put the finishing touches on it, but then I got busy with you ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Aww I'm sorry I distracted you ;)

[Frieda P]

Don't be silly, I had fun ;-)

[kublakhan27]

As did I my dear ;)

[Lover Of Words]

Perfection!

[Frieda P]

woooo ;-) thanks Kelsey

[Lover Of Words]

Woooo my pleasure my friend!