My Love

you are the nectar

in a paralleled dimension

my love expands with the universe 

like a butterfly it flutters in my heart

it takes flight, it has wings, it releases me

it floats over the moon like luminary fireflies

playing in a sweet melody of pears and violins

i dance in the shadows of nymphets and angels

 lips lick the ambrosia of gods and worldly idols

my eyes see the hopes of childlike innocence 

I hear the music of daffodils as they linger

my love brings joy of poppies to my heart

peace of nightingales to my soul

my love expands

 because 

of

 you

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

It looks like a bee's butt, which makes me smile wide...because you left off the stinger ;-) There are times when we just need to sit back on our haunches and assess the situation...and thank our lucky stars you did not leave us looking for the boo-boo bands. This is optimistic and...well...nice. Bumble bee my heart more often, ma'am ;-)

[Frieda P]

haha a bee's butt! Was going for sweet nectar, perhaps a peachy world...but a honey bee without a stinger would cut it too! Consider your heart bumbled. :-)

[KAOlmsted]

:-D xoxo

[andrew mitchell]

lovely format, lovely words, lovely reading! nice as the flow! smooth sailing

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i see the nectar...love the shape of this, the scheme of the theme of this...such a good poem...i would like to see the "love" at the end left off...don't feel that is necessary...the poem says it all before that..
but yes,...such a creative way to format...you are really good at this sort of thing.

jacob

[Stella Armour]

wow, and wow again, a gorgeous poem in it's own right and this wonderful tree like shape that holds it.Very much enjoyed Freida...

[Butch Decatoria]

sweet and soft, love poems are usually creating cavities for me, as usual, have a few now... thanks alot...lol. love it

[InsanityWriter]

Lovely. ^_^ It flows perfectly. (:

[David Scott]

It is essential to know your own love. To see your heart and embrace your own loving nature...
A wonderful poem.

[Tarry Franck]

Such happiness - love the way you shaped this writing - such love :)))) Congrats my dear friend another wonderful poem

[Frieda P]

Ha everyone seems to like that bumble a*s one! ;-) Thanks Tarry!

[Tarry Franck]

;-)

[Sid]

Nicely done, you convey much in a short write and writing the poem in that shape is a nice touch, I don't quite know how you can stick to a structure and still pick the words perfectly without being forced...great write as always!

[Frieda P]

ha I think it might have to do with the fact that I'm anal retentive pretty much ;-) thanks for the great review

[Sid]

Haha :D

[Frieda P]

;-D

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the set-up and the shape of the poem. The good description allowed the reader to feel the emotion and the happiness of love. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

So happy you enjoyed it Coyote, thanks.

[khalid]

from all aspects, this is perfect..shape, symbols, music, words picking and feelings of love and passion..i love it

[Frieda P]

Wow, thanks khalid...you are too kind.

[khalid]

i am not kind, i am fair my dear