Claret Addictions

Claret Addictions

A Poem by Frieda P

we mingle breath,
 you bleed me with life 
your sweet essence 

running through
 every vein of my being
you exhale and my chest heaves

you taint me with your fluid
 then lick it from my backbone

weakened by pumping reperations 
 i'm illicit liquid at your feet
your scars deepen my pain

i seek out antidotes for 
this affliction 
to alleviate my addiction 

all for naught

under your spell
  whimsy, death and hallelujah
 
poisonous mushroom
 winds slam into me
when your day turns somber

crimson between us adulterates
me muted granite

 my cry of blood tears
afraid to venture into the realm
 of a time when you cut me out

i exist to transpire...
compulsion of desire overrules
need for my own life supply
breathe your scarlet air
 until the dark tsunami

toxoid venom in the veins
 of lustful anticipations
for now i'll sip your blood
 and languish

 in the pools of your desires
under your spell 
of fatal attraction
till you cut/

 the bane
 of my

 existence

© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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Photo, music and words were amazing.
"poisonous mushroom
winds slam into me
when your day turns somber"
Funny how poetry had turn to vision and sound. My next step will be you tube. I like the way you led the reading in this poem. I like the closing line. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

And I'm loving this review, thanks Coyote.



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Well this was..... Awesome blossom!
You always give us another way to look at things in different aspects.

If what I said up there ^^^^^ is right, then shoot me now cause I sound grown up! LOL

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

s y e

11 Years Ago

Oh good! :-) I feel smart and bummer -_-
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You don't wanna be a grown up, it's hard work...just enjoy being a wee noodle while you can! ;-D
s y e

11 Years Ago

Bahahaha, I am! :-P
You don,t just explain all sorts of addiction in a realistic , truthful way but you keep us addicted to your persona and writes . Well done as always ....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You are too kind Khalil, thanks so much for your sweet words.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome dear one ...:)
WOW! Sounds like one of my X playmates

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

My condolences...
Your ability to express emotion and the yin/yang of love and passion is ever a work in evolution of thought and artistic expansion.
The want of the pleasure, the fear, the need, the openness with the hidden rooms still locked away.
Perfect signal to keep things mixed up...
You always give a new look at things.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I really love your response to this one David...you read me so well. I may like you a bit after all.. read more
i agree with kublakahn on this one...i am still waiting to exhale here...you gotta give us time to breathe with these writes, oh pickled one....this is so intense it denies the privilege.....awesome write..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha I hear ya but I'm out of control, always do whatever I do to excess, I'm an addict no matter what.. read more
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

as you desire.....pray continue
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha, like I wasn't....did you move to a new place yet?
*Deep breath*...whew...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Might you need mouth to mouth? ;-P
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

It couldn't hurt ;P

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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