Tuff-it

Adult Nursery Rhyme

Crawl into my web

have no fear

deception is subliminal

 mesmerizing reception

you'll have to beg

 to be released 

turnabout is fair play

...she sat down beside him

eating his curds and whey

that'll teach you...

Patience, when you muff-it

the spider was frightened

 and terminated his stay

Reviews

[KeeD]

Haha wow this is creatively genius!
"deception is subliminal
mesmerizing reception" Woahhhhhhhh :P
eating his curds - hahaha
This is is amazing showing how Little Miss Muffet is as fatal if not more than the spider and the spider knows this :P Oh how I want to exchange places with this spider right now

[Frieda P]

Welcome to the Casbah... ;-)

[KeeD]

I don't ever want to escape :P .. oh and the picture is breathtaking :P

[Frieda P]

I thought so too, my friend sent it to me tonight to cheer me up, lucky you, eh? :-D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hey yes I know 'Little Miss Muffet'

[Distant horizons]

:-)

:-)

and

:-)

Beg for more, more like :-)

[Frieda P]

hahaha thanks muchly! ;-)

[writing mojo]

mmm, nice reverse look at the old nursing rhyme ways..your fangs sunk into the essence of this one well

[Frieda P]

ha thanks, my fangs needed sharpening... ;-)

[writing mojo]

vented venom like the taste

[Frieda P]

;-D

[Antonio Valentino]

waww thats the best picture of, Little Miss Muffet, I've, ever seen..

deception is subliminal

thats an interesting thought..

not sure why the spider was frightened.. sometimes patience is a required when one, muffs it..

:)

[Frieda P]

haha that's what she said! Did you know Miss Muffet's name was actually Patience...true story.

[Antonio Valentino]

wow well thats interesting..

but then you'd be patient too, sitting on a tuffet all day with nothing to eat, but curds and whey..

:)

[Frieda P]

Her stepfather wrote that for her in the 16th century, amazing what you learn whilst writing poetry, some education eh? lol

[Antonio Valentino]

i bet you didnt know that, Vincent Price, wrote for the spider.. helppp mee.. helllpppppp meeeeee..

;p

[Frieda P]

Bhahaha ;-P

[Antonio Valentino]

do you remember the name of the movie i was referencing?

[Frieda P]

The Fly?

[Antonio Valentino]

ahhhhhhh.. you're the best hahaha.. its nice to know someone who appreciates their classic cinema lol :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is wickedly cool... next you need to tackle the real relationship of Jack and Jill.

[Frieda P]

Hahaha, you mean like Jack fell down and broke HER crown? ;-P

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Or she pushed him down and broke his family jewel. :p

[Frieda P]

hahaha or that! ;-P

[Frieda P]

You're brilliantly twisted love...
A great widow's write....
You have my full authority...

Ooopsie :)

- Eli

[Frieda P]

haha, I'm gonna have that printed on my business card 'brilliantly twisted' lol!!

I always say to self: " you're Twisted uncomplicated Real " and then I see my insane self smiling lol..... :D xxx

[Frieda P]

Oh man, I thought I was the only one that did that! ha :-D xo

See I told ya, the world is very insane...... hahaha LOLxx

[Sheila Kline]

The poem is perfect for the spider! Cute....think the string of its web will ever break?....lol

[Frieda P]

Hopefully she breaks him...lol ;-)

[Lily Mae]

I so love this.. it's Tracey style lol..she might get jealous:D

[Frieda P]

Ha, so I'm not the only twisted one! ;-)

[Lily Mae]

I love it.. on a friends profile I put a walking skeleton lol

[Frieda P]

Did you catch yours yet?