Tuff-it

Adult Nursery Rhyme

Crawl into my web

have no fear

deception is subliminal

 mesmerizing reception

you'll have to beg

 to be released 

turnabout is fair play

...she sat down beside him

eating his curds and whey

that'll teach you...

Patience, when you muff-it

the spider was frightened

 and terminated his stay

Reviews

[KeeD]

Haha wow this is creatively genius!
"deception is subliminal
mesmerizing reception" Woahhhhhhhh :P
eating his curds - hahaha
This is is amazing showing how Little Miss Muffet is as fatal if not more than the spider and the spider knows this :P Oh how I want to exchange places with this spider right now

[Frieda P]

Welcome to the Casbah... ;-)

[KeeD]

I don't ever want to escape :P .. oh and the picture is breathtaking :P

[Frieda P]

I thought so too, my friend sent it to me tonight to cheer me up, lucky you, eh? :-D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hey yes I know 'Little Miss Muffet'

[-----]

Cute, playful. ;)

[Frieda P]

Grazie ;-)

[s y e]

Oh fudge, this was a nice take on Little Miss Muffet buuuuuut Mama F, Noodles will have nightmares tonight! :// No joke, I fudging hate spiiiders *shivers*
This was really good!!!!!

[Frieda P]

honey, it's not real, calm down...only the ones in Shangrila are real ;-P

[s y e]

Oh phew!!!!
I won't disturb ya mama F ;-)

[Frieda P]

Are you really that scared of spiders? You are a bit bigger than they are ya know?

[s y e]

I know I know. Yes I am. I scream when I see one. Woke the house up once.

[Frieda P]

*rolls eyes* you're such a girl!

[s y e]

Well I would hope so ya donuuuut! I screamed a lot!

[Frieda P]

oh gawd, I thought you were tougher than that....

[s y e]

Nope. Shizz scared man. The little beasts scare beejeezus outta me!

[Frieda P]

Imagine what you look like to them! ;-P

[s y e]

Baaaaaah! Scaryyyy

[Lover Of Words]

Hahahaha wow very creative!

[Frieda P]

Glad you liked it! ;-D

[Emerald Seas]

Nice twist! The games we play and the webs we weave. Careful we don't get snared in our own trap :) a fun read!

[Frieda P]

Tangled webs, yep. Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed.

[quinfinn]

very clever and very surprising write....that creepy crawley was driving me batshit the whole time i was reading ...little miss muffet can be one deceptive little biatch....n'est pas?

[Frieda P]

I actually had one that crawled across the page, but since I wanted to drive you batshit crazy I used that one instead. ;-P

[Baby Ricochet]

Cute. I like it

[Frieda P]

ha it was a Baby spider ;-P

[kublakhan27]

My mind is much more at ease knowing the deception is subliminal...it makes the prospect of begging much more conducive to anticipation ;)

[Frieda P]

So I need to bite you? ;-D

[kublakhan27]

Yes, but not too hard, I bruise easily ;D

[Frieda P]

ha it's always you big boys that go down easy. lol ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Maybe, but it doesn't take much to get me up again ;)

[Frieda P]

O.O Oh no you didn't!

[kublakhan27]

LOL I think I just did...are you that surprised? ;P

[kublakhan27]

Btw, is that your femme fatale pic? :)

[Frieda P]

in all honesty, not really lol

[kublakhan27]

lol ;)

[Frieda P]

nah that was my Halloween costume, I can't show the other ;-P

[kublakhan27]

You can't? Aww ;P

[SHEEMA HUQ]

good fun and i love the graphic, thanks

[Frieda P]

glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading...

[LA Lorena]

Oh, like this one. Much! A clever and adult write. Don't blame the spider for being scared. ;)

[Frieda P]

LOL!!

[David Scott]

Love it! The title with the obvious double entendre.
The playful yet deadly childlike rhym with very adult overtones.
I have always been a fan of the "tuffit". Ha
Stay Tuff. Great write!

[Frieda P]

So glad you enjoyed this David, it was fun...