Tuff-it

Adult Nursery Rhyme

Crawl into my web

have no fear

deception is subliminal

 mesmerizing reception

you'll have to beg

 to be released 

turnabout is fair play

...she sat down beside him

eating his curds and whey

that'll teach you...

Patience, when you muff-it

the spider was frightened

 and terminated his stay

Reviews

[KeeD]

Haha wow this is creatively genius!
"deception is subliminal
mesmerizing reception" Woahhhhhhhh :P
eating his curds - hahaha
This is is amazing showing how Little Miss Muffet is as fatal if not more than the spider and the spider knows this :P Oh how I want to exchange places with this spider right now

[Frieda P]

Welcome to the Casbah... ;-)

[KeeD]

I don't ever want to escape :P .. oh and the picture is breathtaking :P

[Frieda P]

I thought so too, my friend sent it to me tonight to cheer me up, lucky you, eh? :-D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hey yes I know 'Little Miss Muffet'

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the photo. I'm glad I never met a black widow with beauty and web. Nice photo gave life to your words. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

I agree, the photo is a charmer. Thanks Coyote.

[InsanityWriter]

I love that little spider... I could probably watch it for hours. XD Nice poem. ;)

[Frieda P]

ha you would Skittles, it freaked or annoyed most! ;-)

[Ahmad Cox]

That's an awesome poem and an awesome pic

[Frieda P]

ha I love that pic too, when she asked me to write something, I was like the heck am I going to write for this one! ha...thanks Ahmad.

[Kaylor Mason]

Women can be vengeful sometimes

[Frieda P]

Only with good reason ;-P

[KAOlmsted]

This is the dog's bollocks. Love it.

[Frieda P]

hahahahah, I never thought I'd see that one as a review, but it doesn't shock in the least that it came from you! ha ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

My Brit says it all the time, wondered if I could pull it off... ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

I wrote a poem about the black widow and I enjoyed it so much! Love the spider going up and down. Entertaining to a good poem.

[Frieda P]

Ha it was fun....thanks muchly!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Love the spider. Liked the first stanza but got lost after that. Having a thick morning lol!

[Frieda P]

You don't know Patience Muffet...Little Miss Muffet sat on a tuffet....blahblahblah Who raised you, wolves? Everyone knows that nursery rhyme John.

[Annabelle Lee]

this was nice.

[Frieda P]

Danke Annabelle Lee.

[kelvin]

Nicely written it takes creative minds that always have the wheels turning not the empty ones to think and create talented reads as always keep writing fellow writer nice read again i say.

[Frieda P]

So kind of you to say kelvin...thanks.

[kelvin]

you're very welcome

[Deron Alexis]

lol you gonna give some kid nightmares if you keep messing with nursery rhymes very creative per usual

[Frieda P]

haha blame me! who made up these stupid rhymes to begin with...did you notice I included your georgy porgy in one of them! ha

[Deron Alexis]

would that be the one that's rated 18+ ?

[Frieda P]

ha which one might that be? the Shangrila one...

[Deron Alexis]

no
Capacious Felicitations

[Frieda P]

that one doesn't have george in it!? haha

[Deron Alexis]

lol i'm gonna trick myself into thinking I don't wanna know

[Frieda P]

hahaha you're a nutter