Make It A Double

Poking fun at a painful situation.

     

Double dirty Martini, make it Belvedere, extra dry  

it'll soothe my doldrums, on my way to a good cry

I didn't see it coming, you left me high upon a soar

blinded by the light, had no clue what was in store                  

you dropped me heartless from the sky like a B-52 

no concern at all, a mere bug scraped off your shoe

should have stayed home that night, ignorance is bliss

spying on you and my best friend was a big,  fat dis

I used to be the one that could make your motor purr

hindsight 20/20, now all I can think is....................

                      Sweet merciful crap!  I sure do miss her!!

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

Okay, I don't know what's more funny...that last line or that Baby saw two...count them TWO...Sex In the City movies. How the f**k long have I been asleep? *laugh* Great stuff here, Frieda. I'm telling you, though. Try Chopin. (I do like Blevedere, btw) (Or Platinum, if you're on a budget) ;-)

[Frieda P]

hahaha Holy schnikeys! I just saw that too! Bhahahaha....
yes, I plan on it k, when I finish the half dozen bottles I got of Belvedere for xmas....so by Friday, I'd say. ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

It's Friday! :-D Oh my god, my half-brother Brian used to say that, holy shnikeys, way back when...always made me laugh. Don't you love it when people buy you boozes for Christmas?

[Frieda P]

The gift that keeps on giving........... ;-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Lets face it, men sux most of the time. A great write about a bad experience
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[Barbara Walker]

Oh I love the rhythm and flow to this and tho I could feel your tears, I had to smile at your sense of humor!

[Tarry Franck]

That how I was seeing it too - Sex In the City program - Great write :)

[Frieda P]

ha yeah the show was good, the movie stunk, except that part with the naked Latino ;-) thanks

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what a great ending...i don't miss you, but i miss my friend...

ironic.

you are so visual when you write...

[Frieda P]

thanks jacob...glad you enjoyed it

[KeeD]

Haha the last line cracked me up :P
This poem has to be a favorite for me :D i loved its elusiveness, and then the quirky signature Freida P ending was the icing to the cake :) or the cherry to the Martini

[Frieda P]

haha 'quirky signature' that cracked me up...thanks Kee! ;-)

[C.C. Marx]

Only you would turn an awkward situation into something terribly amusing, nice write haha

[Frieda P]

hahaha, that made me laugh out loud, only me, jose, jack, johnny walker and Don Q.....;-P

[Annabelle Lee]

did I read that, right? I ve never been able to make it through a whole ONE!
ahem.... anyhow, great write!

[Frieda P]

haha you're so young and innocent my dear, stay that way please!

[Emerald Seas]

Chuckling - jeez, I'm having a ball reading the RRs tonight. This is a hoot!

[Frieda P]

ha love it when I can brighten someone's day! ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

Hahahaaha thanks for the laugh ;-) funny funny stuff! haha

[Frieda P]

anytime sweetie! ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

:)

[kublakhan27]

I don't know if laughter is the best medicine but I suppose it's healthier than alcohol...I like how you've countered tears with dry wit here...you may owe your muse a drink for this one ;P

[Frieda P]

ha what about a double of alcohol and laughter? hahaha

[kublakhan27]

Haha yes they tend to be synonymous ;P

[Frieda P]

Cheers, LOL

[kublakhan27]

Indeed LOL