Every night before I shut my eyes, I have to read a Freida P poem. It feels exactly what you've described through this poem, a sweet midnight kiss to tuck me away for the night. Starry Starry Night, I can gaze upon the universe and get lost in translation as how I see love in each star now as your midnight kisses. Thank you for this, It was mind blowing and sensual and calmed me and took me off my feet.
I admire your ability to produce poem after poem everyday and each challenging the other in it's own right of greatness.
Awh, you're too sweet my friend, if that's the 'key' to your peaceful finish to the day, I'm over th.. read moreAwh, you're too sweet my friend, if that's the 'key' to your peaceful finish to the day, I'm over the moon thrilled! xo
Oh. Oh. Oh. Oh! Noodlies loved this! Woooooooooooooah! Maaaan, that was steeeeeeeamy!!!! *wipes forehead*
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11 Years Ago
ha but did you like it? ;-D
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You actually have to ask? -.- Man, here was me thinking we were good friends and you would know... w.. read moreYou actually have to ask? -.- Man, here was me thinking we were good friends and you would know... well.... DUH! I did! ^.^
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hahaha I couldn't resist, blame it on that bar of raw dark chocolate with chili!
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Paaahahahaha, excuses excuses!
11 Years Ago
hahahahaha I make no excuses, the devil made me do it!
Well you have produced another very sensuous poem for us to read and sit back and wonder if our lives are as up to par as the one described. Well done, Frieda.
Of all the intimate acts we do kissing is really where it is at, cause that is where you can truly feel the warmth, passion or love... this is sweetly romantic.
Nice. I like the flow of this one a lot...it leaves you a little bit breathless...
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
ha love breathless....
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Breathless = happy kimmer ;-) (except if I need to dial 911...) (then breathless = holy s**t you ki.. read moreBreathless = happy kimmer ;-) (except if I need to dial 911...) (then breathless = holy s**t you killed kimmer) (dude...why would you kill kimmer?)
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..