Every night before I shut my eyes, I have to read a Freida P poem. It feels exactly what you've described through this poem, a sweet midnight kiss to tuck me away for the night. Starry Starry Night, I can gaze upon the universe and get lost in translation as how I see love in each star now as your midnight kisses. Thank you for this, It was mind blowing and sensual and calmed me and took me off my feet.
I admire your ability to produce poem after poem everyday and each challenging the other in it's own right of greatness.
Awh, you're too sweet my friend, if that's the 'key' to your peaceful finish to the day, I'm over th.. read moreAwh, you're too sweet my friend, if that's the 'key' to your peaceful finish to the day, I'm over the moon thrilled! xo
There's something about a midnight kiss that makes it more special than any other kisses. It's either the silence of the surroundings or the starry backdrop. Whichever the case, midnight kisses are sweet and sincere because it marks the end of love of a passing day and brings the same love to a new day. Whether it lasts barely an eye-blink in real time or more than a moment, it is a timeless kiss. Your description of the moment only serves to amplify the greatness of love shared. Great work:)
I gotta either get me a man or stop reading your poetry :P Another beautiful, erotic, sensual write. :)
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11 Years Ago
OMG that made me laugh out loud for real! ha thanks! ;-D
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Haha thought it might but hey I'm being honest what can I say :))
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ha still laughing like a silly girl! ;-D
Perhaps we can go hunting together... lol
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Now that sounds like a novel idea :P Though I hear the Game isn't what it used to be :)
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We'll just have to make up our own rules as we go along then...........
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Haha true but I was speaking about the quality of men out there also, I wonder if there are any who .. read moreHaha true but I was speaking about the quality of men out there also, I wonder if there are any who are really worth hunting for :)
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oh man, you just pissed off half of WC! lol
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Bahahahahaha oh they know I'm just messing around I'm a sweet girl really :))
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Yea you know what they say, those good old Catholic girls are the ones you have to watch out for! ;-.. read moreYea you know what they say, those good old Catholic girls are the ones you have to watch out for! ;-) even if you're not catholic....lol
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haha nah I aint no catholic lol and I'm a good girl .....really o-O
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I know, but what fun is that? ;-P
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More fun than you could ever imagine :-P
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Oh so it's like when I'm good I'm oh so bad! Now I'm reading ya.... ;-P
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Well sort of haha, I guess my way of being is not so easy to explain but there is a lot of fun in be.. read moreWell sort of haha, I guess my way of being is not so easy to explain but there is a lot of fun in being good. :)
My oh my aren't we feeling playful today. This was done with such rich and utter abandonment...I do believe you have woken the second child once again....(wink)....lol. Great write Frieda.:)
i like your use of the word incandescence
you have a great vocabulary and it really shows in this piece, great job i hope to read more of your work, also nice job with the different fonts it really adds emphasis to the ending words =)
keep writing, i'll keep reading =)
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..