Every night before I shut my eyes, I have to read a Freida P poem. It feels exactly what you've described through this poem, a sweet midnight kiss to tuck me away for the night. Starry Starry Night, I can gaze upon the universe and get lost in translation as how I see love in each star now as your midnight kisses. Thank you for this, It was mind blowing and sensual and calmed me and took me off my feet.
I admire your ability to produce poem after poem everyday and each challenging the other in it's own right of greatness.
Awh, you're too sweet my friend, if that's the 'key' to your peaceful finish to the day, I'm over th.. read moreAwh, you're too sweet my friend, if that's the 'key' to your peaceful finish to the day, I'm over the moon thrilled! xo
Every night before I shut my eyes, I have to read a Freida P poem. It feels exactly what you've described through this poem, a sweet midnight kiss to tuck me away for the night. Starry Starry Night, I can gaze upon the universe and get lost in translation as how I see love in each star now as your midnight kisses. Thank you for this, It was mind blowing and sensual and calmed me and took me off my feet.
I admire your ability to produce poem after poem everyday and each challenging the other in it's own right of greatness.
Awh, you're too sweet my friend, if that's the 'key' to your peaceful finish to the day, I'm over th.. read moreAwh, you're too sweet my friend, if that's the 'key' to your peaceful finish to the day, I'm over the moon thrilled! xo
Okay, this one has me beat! Where the heck is my oxygen tank?
Adore it!
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11 Years Ago
All the more reason for more poetry my friend. ;-)
Thanks muchly!
11 Years Ago
U betcha ;)
11 Years Ago
:-D waiting with anticipation....
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Which type of anticipation Then Heinz Ketchup kind or the Rocky Horror Picture Show kind? :-)~ .. read moreWhich type of anticipation Then Heinz Ketchup kind or the Rocky Horror Picture Show kind? :-)~
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Which type of anticipation The Heinz Ketchup kind or the Rocky Horror Picture Show kind? :-)~
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haha neither. I'll leave it up to you to figure it out! ;-)
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Ooooo! That kind of anticipation...I was never good at guessing or obvious hints. lol
Mmm danger in the air indeed ;P I love the little rhymes and alliterations scattered throughout, and pulled off seamlessly as with the last piece...this really "dances" off the page/screen and courts the daring side of the subconscious...very nice Frieda ;)
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11 Years Ago
ha I like that little 'dancing' off the page, you know me so well. ;-)
so.....you wanna make love to me, or are you just gonna tease me with this beautiful poetry? every man reading this is asking the same question, so dont play coy...oh frieda. you are so exquisitely beautiful with your words....leave a man panting for restitution. i fear you are a danger to society and should be removed...preferably to some remote tropical island where you will be ravaged by beautiful native men and worshiped as a goddess....great write!
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11 Years Ago
Okay who's the tease now, you make me swoon with your responses! Belize preferably please! ;-) Than.. read moreOkay who's the tease now, you make me swoon with your responses! Belize preferably please! ;-) Thanks....
I like this. Maybe it's just my filthy mind, but your form here is suggestive of an arrow pointing to your nether regions. was that imagined or intentional?
Oh, moons? you need an apostrophe in there for the posessive. YES!!!!! Gotcha! ;)
Anyone else, I would have let that slip by, but you are special. :)
Seriously though, very nice write. I just like giving you the gears. ;)
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11 Years Ago
Ha, I plead the fifth! Stop reading me so well! Ha, you can gear me up any day LA. ;-)
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..