The Joy of Reading

The Joy of Reading

A Poem by Frieda P

I study you
I  devour you like a book
I interpret you in Braille
that tactile feel like fire and ice
your nuances seize my senses
like ice cream freezes the brain

You permeate my soul 
like a sultry breeze of Belize
I breathe you in like
 smoke filled vodka martini bars
intoxicating my thrill sensors to a frenzied shrill
dance me to your inner core of secret lust
make me a prisoner 
of all that  embodies you
wrap around me
 like a serpent seeking that last breath
when I cease to exhale, take me in again

I smoke you like a fine Cuban cigar 
lingering in the lungs
 and smarting the heart
when it's bad, it's oh so completely divine
let me feast
 from your body and spirit
I glory in every inch of your majestic beauty
I dine with gusto
 and lusty abandon
I drink in your essence, I taste you
lick my lips
 of your manliness 
savoring 
every
 last 
drop
 of
 you


© 2013 Frieda P


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This was very erotic. Certainly nothing like the books I read and I have a library! (laughing) I do love the smell of books, their weight in my hand, the adventures and places they take me to. On the shelf beside me sit copies of Ray Bradbury, Mark Twain, Emily Bronte', Charlotte Bronte' (I love those Bronte' women) Daphne du Maurier, Jack London, O Henry, F. Scott Fitzgerald and Rudyard Kipling...but the REAL library is in another room. This sounds more like "The Joy of Sex" by Alex Comfort...a book I've never got around to reading. I'm more of a transcendentalist in that respect. (laughing) This was an excellent steamy read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks, I figured you liked it cause you're rambling ;-)
Fabian G. Franklin

11 Years Ago

I'm not rambling but commenting more on the title than the content since one is misleading of the ot.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

that was the point my friend.



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great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

thanks hon! ;-)
there is something so sexy about a woman risking everything, putting herself out there with such vulnerability and honesty...

i see that here...he is a vice from which she just can't abstain.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Diggin this review jacob.
Nicely done! Loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

;-) thanks....
Ha. Loved this. I just wrote a much less catching poem on this very line of thought today... Sick minds think alike... Well, at least on like topics. Ha. Or is that great minds? Take your pick.
Loved the poem dear Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Can't wait to read it....thanks!
Ahh books...I would not have found my love of writing if it had not been for books, Fantastic job!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

engrossing? ;-P
C.C. Marx

11 Years Ago

sure I like that word, that works :PPPPP
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

hahaha, absorbing? ;-P
Holy moly macaroni! That was... Intense!!! Ooooooft! Damn girl. You can write. Hahah. Amazing way with words. WOOOOOOW

Posted 11 Years Ago


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s y e

11 Years Ago

Lol, funny. Soooo sleepy..... Must.... Get.... Beauty..... Sleeeeeep...... >.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You're gonna fall asleep in the dentist's chair and he's gonna drill a another hole in your noodles... read more
s y e

11 Years Ago

Noooooo! Dude that's NOT funny! I hate the dentist!!!!
I'd definitely purchase the deluxe edition of that book! ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

hahaha ;-)
"breaths heavy" I need a glass of water or I need to take up smoking.. that was intense.. Pressing down on my keyboard still feeling the rush of excitement being sent through my body from my brain. Fingertips feel so heavy, WOW!
What vivid imagery.. lingering prowess of sexual intent, right from the smooth execution
"that tactile feel like fire and ice
your nuances seize my senses
like ice cream freezes the brain" to a rocky sensation in my mind, heart and pants.."lick my lips
of your manliness
savoring
every
last
drop
of
you" what a fantastic write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha! I get the biggest kick out of your reviews, they've got to be the best responses on WC hands do.. read more
Very nice treat for a Sunday:) I love the deep seductiveness with this.. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks, glad you had a treat on moi. ;-)

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