The Joy of Reading

I study you

I  devour you like a book

I interpret you in Braille

that tactile feel like fire and ice

your nuances seize my senses

like ice cream freezes the brain

You permeate my soul 

like a sultry breeze of Belize

I breathe you in like

 smoke filled vodka martini bars

intoxicating my thrill sensors to a frenzied shrill

dance me to your inner core of secret lust

make me a prisoner 

of all that  embodies you

wrap around me

 like a serpent seeking that last breath

when I cease to exhale, take me in again

I smoke you like a fine Cuban cigar 

lingering in the lungs

 and smarting the heart

when it's bad, it's oh so completely divine

let me feast

 from your body and spirit

I glory in every inch of your majestic beauty

I dine with gusto

 and lusty abandon

I drink in your essence, I taste you

lick my lips

 of your manliness 

savoring 

every

 last 

drop

 of

 you

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was very erotic. Certainly nothing like the books I read and I have a library! (laughing) I do love the smell of books, their weight in my hand, the adventures and places they take me to. On the shelf beside me sit copies of Ray Bradbury, Mark Twain, Emily Bronte', Charlotte Bronte' (I love those Bronte' women) Daphne du Maurier, Jack London, O Henry, F. Scott Fitzgerald and Rudyard Kipling...but the REAL library is in another room. This sounds more like "The Joy of Sex" by Alex Comfort...a book I've never got around to reading. I'm more of a transcendentalist in that respect. (laughing) This was an excellent steamy read.

[Frieda P]

Thanks, I figured you liked it cause you're rambling ;-)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I'm not rambling but commenting more on the title than the content since one is misleading of the other.

[Frieda P]

that was the point my friend.

[Sethnicity]

We already know you are a good writer... But this is Hott! I'm gonna have my lady read this... then I'm gonna taste her with my tongue and drink her fountain of youth!

Thanks for wetting my pallet.
aren't you a mother!? Sounds like someones got an Empty Nest... ;)

[Jibey]

A tasteful poem that gets to the point... :-)

[Lover Of Words]

Very much a pleasure too read :D your way with words is flawless!

[Frieda P]

ha never flawless but thanks for the great review, always appreciated! ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome my friend

[Revery]

Holy, cold shower. ;) Nice my dear. yum, that's all I have to say. Adept are you at the slow hot sexy. mmmmmm 1000/100

[Frieda P]

ha touche, looks like we're both in the same place right now! ;-)
Thanks for the lovely review....probably not a good idea to read each other's sultry stuff at the same time!

[Revery]

OMG, see, we are on the same page. Danger, Danger!!!!!

[Frieda P]

ha is that like stranger danger or overheating!? ;-)

[Revery]

Both!!!!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Erotic and sensual and as usual beautifully written.

[Frieda P]

ha you ready to go out yet on that search? ;-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Bring it on girlfriend lol

[Frieda P]

We could get in big trouble together me thinks! lol

[Carolann Dowsett]

Haha look out world :)

[Frieda P]

Get a babysitter, I'm putting on my red heels right now! ;-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

I don't need no babysitter I've got two teenage girls lol I'm really to roll. :)

[Frieda P]

If only, we could do some pretty destruction! ;-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

I know right lol we would have us some fun :-P

[Claire Twinn]

I'd be afraid if I were him- but totally unable to resist as well! Lovely lusty stuff Frieda !

[Frieda P]

Ha, thanks Claire, I ate my feisty Cheerios that morning!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Such a sensual and erotic poem that feels deep, genuine and caring.

[Frieda P]

I learned a lot from you John. ;-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I think it just comes naturally to you Frieda

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Ah this is classic you, flamboyant and sultry, and losing eloquence for shizzle, and tasting cigars as you get more poetically drunk!

Pray tell, what kind of a teenager were you, really?

[Frieda P]

ha the cigar was a mere prop if you catch my drift...hahaha ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

I'll take an autographed copy of that book you're reading ;-) Nicely penned, Frieda. Very sensuous.

[Frieda P]

How many copies can you handle k? ;-P

[KAOlmsted]

I'll just need the one, but if it's a book I like I'll read it over and over and over... ;-)

[Frieda P]

ha and everyone thinks you're a lunatic, nice sensible read ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

XD I've got 'em all fooled...

[Frieda P]

You're one smart chickadee!

[KAOlmsted]

I'm going to take over the universe when nobody's looking...are you in?

[Frieda P]

haha I'll even kick off my heels so I can work/run quicker...what's the first assignment...?

[KAOlmsted]

Sure, I tell you my Evil Plan and you'll probably take over the universe without me ;-) Just curious, Frieda, have you heard of Poetry.com? I'm looking at them now...I wonder if you ever submitted anything for serious publication. I really think you should...my day is mostly research today, but I'll be off and on here.

[Frieda P]

I've heard it mentioned here but no, never checked it out...and no, to the second also, I've thought about it, up until now all my stuff has been about abuse and extremely dark, not many people are interested in that subject to be honest. ...and would I take over the Universe without you, now wtf fun would that be?!

[KAOlmsted]

Well, I've always said, yours is a voice that needs to be heard on that particular subject, and not just here. I joined poetry.com but have yet to submit...I may think about it for a while. I very rarely do anything that is not deliberate...like taking over the universe. Yeah, we better recruit LA, too, she can design the uniforms ;-)

[Frieda P]

haha hope part of that uniform is Louboutin's, we'll probably need to kick some a*s, might as well do it in style!

[KAOlmsted]

I think with the proper outfit, we can get the job done ;-)

[Frieda P]

Have no doubt with proper outfits or without, although that could get a little drafty! ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

It may speed up the mission, though...something to consider. Good work.

*laugh* Oh my god...how old are we again???

[Frieda P]

In human years? lol....there must be a place in space that slows time down...we'll dwell there. ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

Most definitely.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

! ^_^

[Frieda P]

Grazie! ;-)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Welcome :D