Who's Sorry Now

Who's sorry now

what goes around, comes around

there's talk that she's cheating on you

exactly what you did to me

karma's a b***h and all that s**t

a broken heart...don't get me started

listened to all the love songs

cried me a river and it cried it some more

now put on your head phones and suck it

your cheating heart is gonna smart

when you find out her lover

is none other....

                                        

Reviews

[KeeD]

Haha Karma's a b***h, but oh do I love her. This was an amusing piece and you stabbed him right in the jewels with this one. Respect and Loyalty is basically what one expects, can't provide it.. don't expect to ride it! I love your poetic attacks :D their so badass and although amusing to us, this should hit whoever its aimed at..and hit them hard :) great write :D xoxo

[Frieda P]

Haha you gotta get em where it hurts most! Those freaking jewels of yours, well....not your's, in general, you know what I mean, ha...I'm outa here...................grazie!

[KeeD]

lmao a hit a swing and a near miss .. My poor jewels :P :) you're such a talented writer.

[KeeD]

poem after poem every day I think you write a new one and their all beyond good.. Most defining the meaning of great

[Frieda P]

Ha, is that a pick up line or WHAT? ;-P

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

LOL!!! Do you know something ?!
You have it all , honestly :)

[Frieda P]

Bhahahaha ;-)
thanks!!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

:)

[kublakhan27]

A running theme seems to have manifested itself in the last couple of days while I wasn't looking...

[Frieda P]

Whatever are you talking about? ;-D

[kublakhan27]

It doesn't matter, I'll just bide my time awaiting sweet retribution with you ;D

[Frieda P]

ha dems fighting words! ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Haha indeed ;)

[Frieda P]

pfft go for it, let's see who cries UNCLE first ! haha

[kublakhan27]

LOL Hey I'm on your side here...unless you WANT the alternative :D

[Frieda P]

hahahahaha okay that really made me laugh out loud!

[kublakhan27]

LOL :D

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I am

[Frieda P]

Sorry for reading? ;-P

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

nah....for ya

[Carolann Dowsett]

Wow such anger and spit in this. So emotive and full of revenge and pain. Awesome writing as usual Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Ha, spit, yep. Thanks for the great review Carolann. :-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Haha I meant spite but yeah spit too maybe :)

[Frieda P]

hahahahaha ;-D

[Ahmad Cox]

This poem brought a deep smile to my heart when I read it. Thanks for posting and sharing.

[Frieda P]

:-D thanks for reading it! ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You got to love that boomerang when it hits the person who hit you... I raise a glass and toast karma for always being true.

[Frieda P]

ha Cheers, thanks Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Clink, gulp gulp

[InsanityWriter]

Nice. ;) I liked it 'muchly' as you would say. (;

[Frieda P]

hahaha funny Skittles! Thanks 'muchly'....that's much more than much ya know! ;-P

[Kaylor Mason]

Oh my lord . . . I do believe that if the ending means what I think it means, the lady in this poem has a particularly refined sense of vengeance. I'm not sure whether to be in God-like awe of her or to admire her from a long, safe distance or to run like hell when she walks my way down the street. Probably a bit of each.

[Frieda P]

haha that made me laugh out loud, great response that's what I was hoping for, especially from the guys here....

[Tarry Franck]

Don't you just love Karma - especially when it comes faster than you expected. I know it has come around in my life for people that have screwed me over. Great poem!!!

[Frieda P]

I don't know, Karma is losing her touch me thinks! ;-) Thanks Tarry...

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I still say live and let live, but guns and roses could do me good about now. Intense piece Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Bond would disagree, Live & Let Die ;-)