Dance With The Devil

           Why does the purple sky

           arouse me to

           wantonly dance with the devil

           maybe the majestic colors 

           perhaps 

           the sky's glowing embers

           amethyst burns me 

           drenched in a sultry scarlet dipped

            tonic of intoxicating fine wine 

                                          soaking up Sugarplums 

magpies swing on my heart

their lush warble 

entices a pulsating 

horizontal mambo

trip the light fandango

glide into the blue moon

 assaulting

a purple sky with mystic baubles

spins my head

 to magical nights

strumming wicked

  plucking at my

 heart beats

catapulted my senses

 senseless

blazing purple rain

 soothes my soul

its hypnotic allure

enraptures, entrances

 seduces me

why do shimmering

purple skies

 titillate me...?

burgeoning me

 over the blue moon

mesmerized in lipid pools

of your dark soul

i open my eyes 

and all I taste 

is essence

of you

Reviews

[critic h]

another enthralling piece of cake. As and always. amethyst skies, dancing devil and magpies invite me a dance with the exhausted rubish devil. may the words rise that i may have them. your poems have been embalming the true sense of poetry and i am not buttering. we dont see really good poems these days.

[Frieda P]

Wow, I don't know how I missed this review, thanks so much...this has made my day critic h!

[Bluefire]

This is very good, I like the wording and the title.
Well done ^^

[Frieda P]

Thanks for the visit, and the review Bluefire.

[Bluefire]

No problem.

[KeeD]

OMG :D amethyst skies are so beautiful and the way you've gotten something so amazing out of them, you're beyond creative the idea, the allure of this poem, superb! I could see myself peer into the eyes of the devil, her soul dance with me under purple haze :)

[Frieda P]

;-) ha Kee, your responses always make me giggle like a silly school girl. MWAH!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

ends with a graceful tribute and has a really classical vibrant feel to it, nice writing

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Sheema.

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, how I love the color purple.........every shade of it!! It is a majestic color, sending one to a blue moon to dip into the dark side of it.....a wonderful, come alive, visual write!!
I'm off to find my purple crayon, but I am leaving the blue one in the box...lol

[Frieda P]

haha Sheila, life is a box of crayons, isn't it?

[Carolann Dowsett]

To be lured into a dance with the devil, a sensual write, though those who dance with the devil tend to get burnt :) As usual Frieda amazingly done.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Carolann, can get burnt, YES! But they have a balm for that ;-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

:-)

[Frieda P]

ha ;-P

[Tarry Franck]

Captivated me from the first line! The ending is perfect. Great imagery. You go girl!!!

[Frieda P]

Wooo, glad you liked it! ;-)

[Deron Alexis]

well said the magic of it all really captivating something about the color purple has that effect and the way they danced over the moon very well written

[Frieda P]

Would love to dance over a purple moon. :-)
Thanks Deron.

[Deron Alexis]

lol me 2

[Frieda P]

;-D

[InsanityWriter]

Fandango... I love that word. ;) Nice poem! ^_^

[Frieda P]

haha, me too...funny how certain words have their own charm, thanks :-)

[Ahmad Cox]

Aww. Very beautiful and sensual and sweet at the same time.

[Frieda P]

Ooooo what a nice combo eh? ;-)