You are a word-woman. The poem is amazing. I had to read for the journey into thoughts and good words.
"Now I lay me down to sleep
'my mind's illusions drift into slumber'
it's all in the twist of a wrist,
a blind of an eye"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Wow, coming from the word-master I am truly humbled Coyote.
It is so much easier to speak with the pen, you're right. My pen never says the wrong thing, or gets bogged down with emotion, and I can scratch off or erase lines and change my meaning entirely, or edit the hell out of it, and no one is the wiser. It's also nice to read poetry, and interpret those words to suit our own purpose, and mean what we want it to mean, instead of just having to listen to the truth of the matter.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
It certainly is, I guess that's why we're all poets to begin with...if only we could scratch or eras.. read moreIt certainly is, I guess that's why we're all poets to begin with...if only we could scratch or erase in real life eh?
True there's no cure for love but there is a remedy for the pain - the pen. So as you say...the being and ending is poetry!
"pen the heart til'
its torments coo"
Pretty poetry dipped in covert sarcasm!
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..