Hooker Lips

Hooker lips, slurping tips

sweetly 

water my blossom

lightly blush my style

feed me gently 

watch it grow

earthly girth is, key

filament reaches for the sun

let the raise 

shine down on me

then sparkle me

 like the moon

my delicious 

tropical forest

singly carpel my stigma 

plant a seed, 

watch it grow

pucker up, 

the winds a tease

in full bloom, my petals wet

 my nectar sweet, 

watch me 

blow

 juicy, 

red,

 ripened,

 ready kisses

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

omg i think i went out with her once.. ! ..

i wonder if guys take longer over there when their peeing in the bushes

okay who said that, that was just wrong

you're welcome

okay now we have to rewrite the, instead of roses on my piano, id rather have, tulips, on my organ joke..

see.. there's never a break in comedy....... ..

so umm how much do these flowers charge for say like uhh.. an hour or so in a motel sex, i mean, six.. whew..

forget my lady, im getting those for me for valentines day..

okay thats enough this could go on all day

Frieda, this was funny, and clever and you know.. kinda sheckshay too ;))

seriously, great piece.. always fun and unpredictable, and impressive, to read one of your, flowery, pieces

welllll done!

:)

[Frieda P]

hahaha, I think you've lost your way, get back on the insanity thread Antonio!

[David Scott]

Wonderful Frieda. Just a little urban trip into the rain forest...

[Frieda P]

MWAH, glad you liked! ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Flowers weren't my first thought when I read the title. Great poem frieda

[Frieda P]

I didn't think it would be Baby. ;-)

[Annabelle Lee]

not wht I thought this pom was gonna be aboit. jaha. great job!

[Frieda P]

ha, you should know better Annabelle, always expect the unexpected! Thanks!

[Annabelle Lee]

and apparenyly i cant spell again

[Michael G.]

First, the write is sensuously playful. (You do this well, btw.) You weave a trail through your garden, then admit, it really is a garden. Great work, doing all that.
But you did get me curious about the plant. one of 1900 species in the "psycotria elata" family, many as strange as this one. Great job. My education continues.

[Frieda P]

I know, don't you just love it when you learn something while reading poetry? Strangely odd and mesmerizing plant for sure.

[LA Lorena]

Oh geez. I think I'm gonna need a refill on my coffee. you are at it again! ;) I had no clue what to expect when I saw the title, but I was ready for anything. Then I read it and realized I was so wrong! You have the advantage of being on Eastern time, give me a few hours to catch up to your mind.

[Frieda P]

Just making sure you're awake girlfriend! ;-)

[Tate Morgan]

Damn it Frieda !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol Stop!!!

[Frieda P]

hahaha, I can't! ;-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Ok so now I'm not going to look at flowers the same again, what are you doing to me? :) Another awesomely sensual write.

[Frieda P]

oh geez, I'm really messing with your head Carolann! ha, thanks hon!

[Carolann Dowsett]

:)

[Frieda P]

;-)

[Night]

...geez Frieda this is better than The Discovery Channel...lol.

[Frieda P]

ha better, I don't know about that, perhaps a little more 'flair' to it! ;-P

[Night]

...:)

[Frieda P]

Did I miss the fights? ;-)

[Night]

...nah, it all worked out.:)

[Frieda P]

I knew it would, you're just a big squishy teddy bear at heart. ;-P

[Night]

I guess I am...lol..:)

[Frieda P]

;-D

[AYVID N]

You have created a masterpiece here. The poem is very suggestive and sensual and the dual meanings are done quite artfully. Clever Creative writing Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Wooo, masterpiece, I should kiss you with those juicy red lips! ;-)

[kublakhan27]

I was just on my way to bed when I caught the title, then curiosity got the best of me...the good news is that it most certainly didn't kill anything...it did wake up a few things...you're a cruel one Frieda *shakes head* cruel, cruel woman ;D

[Frieda P]

What's the problem k, you have a thing about flowers or what? ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha only flowers that look like that ;P (also, note the fact that I'm not resorting to puns that involve DE-flowering...I'd rather not be that obvious ;))

[Frieda P]

Ha! So glad you didn't ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Hehe ;)