Hooker Lips

Hooker lips, slurping tips

sweetly 

water my blossom

lightly blush my style

feed me gently 

watch it grow

earthly girth is, key

filament reaches for the sun

let the raise 

shine down on me

then sparkle me

 like the moon

my delicious 

tropical forest

singly carpel my stigma 

plant a seed, 

watch it grow

pucker up, 

the winds a tease

in full bloom, my petals wet

 my nectar sweet, 

watch me 

blow

 juicy, 

red,

 ripened,

 ready kisses

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

omg i think i went out with her once.. ! ..

i wonder if guys take longer over there when their peeing in the bushes

okay who said that, that was just wrong

you're welcome

okay now we have to rewrite the, instead of roses on my piano, id rather have, tulips, on my organ joke..

see.. there's never a break in comedy....... ..

so umm how much do these flowers charge for say like uhh.. an hour or so in a motel sex, i mean, six.. whew..

forget my lady, im getting those for me for valentines day..

okay thats enough this could go on all day

Frieda, this was funny, and clever and you know.. kinda sheckshay too ;))

seriously, great piece.. always fun and unpredictable, and impressive, to read one of your, flowery, pieces

welllll done!

:)

[Frieda P]

hahaha, I think you've lost your way, get back on the insanity thread Antonio!

[Amanda Granger]

Great double entendre! Just one thing I noticed (nitpicking, but in case you were concerned about typos :P) you have "raise" but I think you meant "rays shine down on me" haha I could be wrong though. Either way, great, seductive write! You really made my mind wander. Having the image placed at the bottom is a nice touch. Nice work!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Amanda, yes I know, I went back and forth with that one, whether to leave it at ray's, which would have read the same but bot had the same impact...not sure which works better. Thanks so much for your kind review.

[Butch Decatoria]

Wow, "Like the moon my delicious" wonderful write... enjoyed that in more ways than one...

[Frieda P]

hahah, I think I get it....thanks !

[Sheila Kline]

I can see why these flowers are referred to as 'Hooker's Lips'. I wonder what innocent blushing bloom they shall captivate. The unsuspecting victim shall be "done for" before it even knows what puckered up!!
All kidding aside - your write is intriguing! Excuse me while I go freshen my lipstick!

[Frieda P]

haha I'm sure it's either Jungle Red or Dolce & Gabbana's Iconic!! Or perhaps...Fire and Ice!! ;-)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Wow! This flower certainly does look like some very full and kissable lips. Wonderfully written and oh so imaginative.

[Frieda P]

ha thanks talk about a picture paints a thousand words eh?

[AWickedMoon]

Ha-ha! I think that plant is my new favorite flower.

[Frieda P]

ha yes it is pretty titillating!

[Kaylor Mason]

Now that's just awesome!

[Frieda P]

I know right? Nature and it's bounty, cool....

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another very nice piece which can be erotic or not as the reader choses. Well put together and elegant.

[Frieda P]

Thanks John, coming from the Master of Erotica, I'm getting all goose bumply.... ;-)

[Deron Alexis]

where i come from we call them hot lips natures sense of humor lol very good expressionism it seems you may actually be a flower XD

[Frieda P]

:-O

[s y e]

Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. WOW

Oooooft, it was gooooood!

[Frieda P]

Are you old enough to read this little farfalle? ha ;-)

[s y e]

Jeez I don't know! You asked me to read it :-P
Hahaha

[Frieda P]

hahah nobody ever listens to me! ;-P

[s y e]

I do! :P

[Frieda P]

ha! you're in trouble now..............

[s y e]

Whoopsie..... What'd I do??? *hides*

[Frieda P]

I meant if you pay attention to me, pay attention!!

[s y e]

Oh sorry. Ok, ha