Ill Padre

Ill Padre

A Poem by Frieda P

Everybody knows,
 no one speaks
silence is golden and deadly
you won't live forever 

your amoebas' keep chomping at my brain
you've successfully stigmatized my prosperity
your silent sword
has yielded me mute 

You'll be gone and I'll live on 
coasting along simmering in this shadow
amidst your past
 unforgivable transgressions

Absolution will utterly never be granted

unless you find it in another dimension
if for some inescapable, 
irrational reasoning,
you repent 
 unspeakable truths,
should penance 
forgive your trespasses

IF they shall open the gates of paradise to you

I'd gladly burn in 

hell for eternity




© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P
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An interesting blend of religion, truth and condemnation. Unfortunate, but somehow understandable that you would condemn the innocent to the fires of Hell in the afterlife too. I guess after being licked by flames for so long, you get used to the heat of the kitchen.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

On occasion the heat in the kitchen is tolerable but you know how those flare ups catch you by surpr.. read more



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ohhh haha how ironic is th. I enjoyed this one as well

Posted 11 Years Ago


No mincing of words here. Damned! Powerful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha I'm not good at tact in these situations! ;-)
I seem to have missed this one...obviously it packs quite the punch, and from an interpretive standpoint, it reinforced the notion for me that death is a scary thing no matter how much sugar you coat it with...to quote Jim Morrison, the future's uncertain and the end is always near...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha hangover? You never mentioned that :o I'm not sure of the title myself, it'll probably come to .. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

K k....don't break anything especially your writing hand ;-)
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Oh I will definitely take care of that, don't worry ;)
Wow very good!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

thanks kelsey...
Very powerful words and message. I got chills reading this poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

The write wasn't so hot either, thanks Ahmad.
Nice bite to this one. Aren't we all damned in one way or another? Love the art work too. Everyone has a demon or two to fight, everyone has a sin or two to answer... Such is life. Nice writing - thoroughly enjoyed!

Posted 11 Years Ago


And you thought my poem about winter gave you a chill..... ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha! Touche.
An interesting blend of religion, truth and condemnation. Unfortunate, but somehow understandable that you would condemn the innocent to the fires of Hell in the afterlife too. I guess after being licked by flames for so long, you get used to the heat of the kitchen.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

On occasion the heat in the kitchen is tolerable but you know how those flare ups catch you by surpr.. read more
This good although that freakin picture scared shizz outta me :// not cool mama F, not cool!
This was beautifully written, beautiful words. Loved it as always! xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


There's no absolution for some transgressions...
that leave only a burning legacy of eternal hate...in all dimensions

Frieda, a very powerful poem from you. I can feel ominous black clouds rumbling under the silence. 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago



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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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