Buried Diddums

Graveyard is my soul

 wisps of mongrel dog tails

mangy mad dogs bite

yelping for their dinner

bottled southern comfort

slaughtered pigs feet

to soothe your diddums

fry poison mushrooms

an elixir of stinging nettle

it's never over til the end

there is no end in sight

swallow the worm whole

gag on worldly powers

spit it out and you die

kick the can

hide the bucket

first prize on the list

brain sick membranes

grey matters madness implode

bend over for a abrupt rise

eternity has been granted

Reviews

[Sid]

Didn't get it, feeling really dumb right now, it's interesting to read what with the great wording and the "mellow" imagery but could you please enlighten me O great one! Don't mind me too much, sleep deprived right now but don't want to sleep. I mean it's freakin' 3 am here and I want to go to the terrace and scream out, talk about insanity...damn I'm gonna stop talking now...interesting write btw!

[Frieda P]

Truthfully, I like your review better....it's actually a lot less insane! ;-)

[Sid]

:)

[Frieda P]

you don't want to know, believe me, still appreciate it muchly!! ;-)

[Deron Alexis]

lol you're a fan of Illidan too

[Rob Santana]

I don't even wanna know what this poem means,just because it says "Graveyard is my soul " I like it,haha

[Frieda P]

Ha smart man! thanks...

[KAOlmsted]

Cool. Did somebody do this to you, say "Aw poor baby" and not quite mean it? Because this is a great retort. I'll keep it in mind next time some a*****e says something condescending to me.

[Frieda P]

Something like that, not exactly.

[kublakhan27]

Wow, talk about unsettling...the kind of imagery that makes you squint as you read it...in other words, I love it :)

[Frieda P]

Squint=Love, now you tell me!

[kublakhan27]

Haha Well you know, we all need the occasional dose of ugliness to remind us of what beauty is...this is beauty too, don't get me wrong, but it's haunting beauty, as opposed to the beauty of, say, a doctor? ;D

[Frieda P]

hahaaha bend over baby. ;-)

[kublakhan27]

LOL My poor imagination is being overworked...down boy...

[Frieda P]

hahahaha down boy is right, so NOT what I meant!!!

[kublakhan27]

LOL What, were you shocked by that retort? :D

[Frieda P]

Moi? pfft...

[kublakhan27]

I know, but I asked anyway ;)

[Frieda P]

ha you're cute ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha do I dare say you are too? No, it's probably not daring at all...you know me now ;P

[Frieda P]

I think two cute's cancel each other out, I'm not sure, I suck at math! ;-P

[kublakhan27]

"I know this defies the laws of gravity, but you see, I never studied law" - Bugs Bunny ;P

[Frieda P]

Good thing I'm a nuclear physicist and figured that one out! ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Haha indeed ;)

[Frieda P]

Nanananananananananananannananana! ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Hehe ;P

[Frieda P]

wanna try? ;-)

[kublakhan27]

I suppose one must be open to new things...on many levels...;)

[Frieda P]

I see you got hit with a hockey stick way too many times ;-)

[kublakhan27]

LOL Maybe, but I thought that would have knocked everything INTO place ;D

[Lucien Maier]

Wow great vocabulary throughout the piece.
I love the haunting cadence the piece has well done.

[Frieda P]

Thank you kind sir.