Buried Diddums

Graveyard is my soul

 wisps of mongrel dog tails

mangy mad dogs bite

yelping for their dinner

bottled southern comfort

slaughtered pigs feet

to soothe your diddums

fry poison mushrooms

an elixir of stinging nettle

it's never over til the end

there is no end in sight

swallow the worm whole

gag on worldly powers

spit it out and you die

kick the can

hide the bucket

first prize on the list

brain sick membranes

grey matters madness implode

bend over for a abrupt rise

eternity has been granted

Reviews

[Sid]

Didn't get it, feeling really dumb right now, it's interesting to read what with the great wording and the "mellow" imagery but could you please enlighten me O great one! Don't mind me too much, sleep deprived right now but don't want to sleep. I mean it's freakin' 3 am here and I want to go to the terrace and scream out, talk about insanity...damn I'm gonna stop talking now...interesting write btw!

[Frieda P]

Truthfully, I like your review better....it's actually a lot less insane! ;-)

[Sid]

:)

[Frieda P]

you don't want to know, believe me, still appreciate it muchly!! ;-)

[Deron Alexis]

lol you're a fan of Illidan too

[Deron Alexis]

this poem shows a bit of anger disgust and hopelessness the way people act like dogs to get their due in the world the way they're willing to do anything and give only the scraps or even their waste and deliberate harmful acts to spear them expense and its not going to get better so good people just have to take the world as it comes or you won't survive .some though don't want want to survive in a world where corruption rains and reigns from the heights all the way down to us lowly non politician mortals

how accurate was I ? XD

[Frieda P]

Oooo, you're good if you can decipher my psychobabble, pretty much spot on, it's generalizations of disgust with a bit of own personal angst thrown in. Woooooo, go to the head of the class! ;-)

[Deron Alexis]

LOL thanx teacher maybe we could skip the test and I could get an "A" to show my parents XD

[Frieda P]

No tests necessary A++++ ;-)
I don't know if it would make your parents proud to know you comprehend insanity!! ;-P

[Deron Alexis]

LOL crazy people are a class of our own what kind of parents would make a crazy child XD

[Frieda P]

Good question, you should be able to answer that one, you're the genius here! When you figure it out, let me know........... ;-)

[Deron Alexis]

the answer is crazy parents XD they don't write but when they speak well my house a hub of science and poems and music and stuff

[Frieda P]

That explains perfectly why you're a genius and I'm insane! Thanks!! ;-P

[Deron Alexis]

i don't see the difference between the two terms :P

[Frieda P]

HAHAHAHAHHAHHA true! See how smart you are!

[Baby Ricochet]

"Mangy mad dogs bite yelping for their dinner bottled southern comfort slaughtered pigs feet." Sounds like where I grew up. Good one Frieda

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby....unfortunate now I have such a distaste for Southern Comfort.

[Ahmad Cox]

I have to admit this poem touches me in a dark place.

[Frieda P]

Mission accomplished. Thanks Ahmad.

[Geon Quuin]

The only thing I got is the line "bottled southern comfort" which I think is bourbon. Which is my favorite drink.

[Frieda P]

Read between the lines, thanks.

[Annabelle Lee]

ick. bit wonderfal imagery!

[Frieda P]

Yeah, some aren't so pretty, as you well know hon...

[Annabelle Lee]

yes. i do.

[Frieda P]

:( xo

[LA Lorena]

The madness continues, doesn't it? ;)

[Frieda P]

ha, busted! ;-)

[Night]

...well, today, I can relate to this...it's one of those days.

[Frieda P]

Gah, not you!

[Night]

yep.

[Frieda P]

It can't be, you were my last hope....

[Night]

..sometimes I just wanna say f**k all this s**t...sometimes.

[Frieda P]

I hear ya loud and clear my friend...

[Night]

I'm sorry I swore on this thread...just saying...thanks.

[Frieda P]

ha no worries, this thread could use it!

[s y e]

Oooooooooft! Wow, great wording my dear!

Noodle0 loved it. ;-)

[Frieda P]

Grazie farfalle ;-)

[s y e]

I have ANOTHER new name? :-D Hehe, I lurve youuuuu

[Frieda P]

ha it fits, you remind me of flutterby :-)

[s y e]

Dude, a flutterfly? Whaaat? ^.^ Your tooooo cayoteeeee.

[Frieda P]

ha what I used to call butterflies as a kid, not 'fly'!! ewww

[s y e]

Hahahahaha, your so cute!

[Lover Of Words]

wow very good very very good!!!!!

[Frieda P]

thank you so much!

[Lover Of Words]

my pleasure