Poetic Insanity

I'm dizzy with insanity

      clouds of butterflies

like swarms of locus

      airy like cloud 9 candy

feeling light and sinful

    invade my consciousness 

i am heady, lost the plot, but don't stop

     i go insane every time

you speak a poem or touch my name

    i twirl around in the spin of your tale

the elixir of another's essence

     throw down the gauntlet

release the kraken 

     dig in, fill me, drain me, devour me

no restraints nor empty spaces remain

    keep me wakeful with your endlessness

i surrender my loins to this moment

    lie next to me in the grassy soul of poetry

Reviews

[KeeD]

release the kraken !!!!!
:D wow such a provocative, creative and intelligent write :P "bites lower lip"
May you never mow that poetic lawn for it springs out flowers of words from far beyond any normal imagination, your creation gives life to my eyes and lifts me up to clearer skies where I can dream upon your clouds and express my feelings, shout them out loud. Frieda P, oh how you inspire me :)
I'm kinda turned on, just saying. LOL

[Frieda P]

Ha, glad you liked that part! I love your reviews Kee...thanks so much x

[Tate Morgan]

Take me to your leader I surrender lol

[Frieda P]

ha I'm shocked Tate! ;-)

[Ahmad Cox]

Hehe I love the sensual rhythm and the flow of this poem. And its very beautiful as well. :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Ahmad.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

damn you make poetry sexy...the muse and you lying in the grass...surrendering the loins to the words...intercourse with the pen.. lovemaking with a soul...a deep soul.
"every time you speak a poem or touch my name"

that is a wonderful line.

[Frieda P]

damn I love this review, thanks so much jacob!

[Night]

...you're good..."release the kraken".....If I wasn't afraid then, I am now...lol. Seriously Frieda...this is exquisite poetry at it's best...." lie next to me in the grassy soul of poetry"...beautiful.:)

[Frieda P]

haha, you're afraid of me or the kraken!?

[Night]

...lol. I'll never tell...:)

[Frieda P]

BOO!

[AYVID N]

Wow! After reading this I just want to settle on the carpet, take me anti-anxiolytic prescription with a cup of warm milk and float somewhere...and re-read this again n again...
And I am going to keep this as a favorite and do just that!

[Frieda P]

wooo, does that mean we fall asleep together? ;-)

[AYVID N]

:)))) One day...we'll time it!

[Frieda P]

ha :-D

[AYVID N]

:)

[kublakhan27]

*Wipes brow* Whoa...I'll never sleep reading stuff like this at this time of night...who's hungry? O_o

[Frieda P]

Wow, how did you lost in there...ha did you ever sleep my friend? ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha Yes but not deeply...though I guess it depends on how you define deep ;)

[Frieda P]

you never stop, do you? ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Never ;P

[Frieda P]

I know! What a dumbass question ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Yeah you'll never get a moment's peace with me haha ;)

[Frieda P]

Tell me something I didn't know....;-P

[kublakhan27]

;)

[Lover Of Words]

Airy like cloud 9 candy! haha my favorite line of the poem but the whole pome is fun and airy Lovely job as always

[Frieda P]

Thanks, glad you liked it. ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

I did!

[Frieda P]

:-D don't make me start again!

[Lover Of Words]

I love your work!!!!

[Frieda P]

Awh shucks ;-P

[Lover Of Words]

:)