Poetic Insanity

I'm dizzy with insanity

      clouds of butterflies

like swarms of locus

      airy like cloud 9 candy

feeling light and sinful

    invade my consciousness 

i am heady, lost the plot, but don't stop

     i go insane every time

you speak a poem or touch my name

    i twirl around in the spin of your tale

the elixir of another's essence

     throw down the gauntlet

release the kraken 

     dig in, fill me, drain me, devour me

no restraints nor empty spaces remain

    keep me wakeful with your endlessness

i surrender my loins to this moment

    lie next to me in the grassy soul of poetry

Reviews

[KeeD]

release the kraken !!!!!
:D wow such a provocative, creative and intelligent write :P "bites lower lip"
May you never mow that poetic lawn for it springs out flowers of words from far beyond any normal imagination, your creation gives life to my eyes and lifts me up to clearer skies where I can dream upon your clouds and express my feelings, shout them out loud. Frieda P, oh how you inspire me :)
I'm kinda turned on, just saying. LOL

[Frieda P]

Ha, glad you liked that part! I love your reviews Kee...thanks so much x

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Jeeze girl you are prolific! Lucky to be almost a professional writer and gets lots of writing time. This is one of my favourites of your poems. Love that final stanza it it powerful. Hope Quin likes it too lol

[Frieda P]

High praise coming from you John, much appreciated, thanks! Now why would you think Quin would like it? ;-)

[Mark Anthony Games (Hum..]

Not sure what a Kraken is?, I am guessing some kind of mystical mayhem. I like the surrender hinted in this work. Do we ever have free will when it comes to desire. I enjoyed this, thanks for the read request.

[Frieda P]

ha, been hanging around the minions too long, the Kraken is a mystical sea creature, yes. It's a line from a movie, they repeat so often... Thanks so much for this great review.

[David Scott]

OK dear... You had me convinced with "release the kraken"! ha. You is crazy girl! Crazy for some lovin!!!

[Frieda P]

Who knew, a silly kraken...ha thanks David!

[Carolann Dowsett]

I'll never look at poetry the same again :) You even make insanity seem sexy. Another great write Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

haha your review made me laugh like a crazy person. ;-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

hehe :)

[LA Lorena]

I was right, you don't ever sleep, and now I know just why! This was really good Frieda, me likes this one muchly.

[Frieda P]

Thanks, are you saying I don't sleep to write poetry, or I write poetry cause I don't sleep. ;-P

[LA Lorena]

both, as well as all the images from reading poetry run round your brain, causing you to lose even more sleep thinking and figuring!

[Frieda P]

ha, sounds like a three ring circus in there, wait...it is!

[InsanityWriter]

I approve of this poem, very much. ;) Spectacularly fantabulous piece here!! (;

[Frieda P]

wooo I approve of your review. ;-) Thanks!

[Sirius King]

dig in, fill me, drain me, devour me
no restraints nor empty spaces remain

very nice :-)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Serenus. ;-)

[Sirius King]

:-)

[kelvin]

Nicely written read here this is some cloud nine candy in itself spin around in the spin of your tale the elixir of another' s essence, this is good stuff as always keep writing fellow writer.

[Frieda P]

ha, glad you think so. thanks

[Pax]

now that's something to be insane about.. :D
wonderful work my friend ms. F....

[Frieda P]

ha that made me laugh, thanks so much Pax ;-)

[Michael G.]

No holds barred here. Even the picture makes a dramatic statement. Fun, sensual write. (release the Kraken? That's getting down to the base line.)
Very well done.

[Frieda P]

hahaha yep the kraken is cracking ;-)