Poetic Insanity

I'm dizzy with insanity

      clouds of butterflies

like swarms of locus

      airy like cloud 9 candy

feeling light and sinful

    invade my consciousness 

i am heady, lost the plot, but don't stop

     i go insane every time

you speak a poem or touch my name

    i twirl around in the spin of your tale

the elixir of another's essence

     throw down the gauntlet

release the kraken 

     dig in, fill me, drain me, devour me

no restraints nor empty spaces remain

    keep me wakeful with your endlessness

i surrender my loins to this moment

    lie next to me in the grassy soul of poetry

Reviews

[KeeD]

release the kraken !!!!!
:D wow such a provocative, creative and intelligent write :P "bites lower lip"
May you never mow that poetic lawn for it springs out flowers of words from far beyond any normal imagination, your creation gives life to my eyes and lifts me up to clearer skies where I can dream upon your clouds and express my feelings, shout them out loud. Frieda P, oh how you inspire me :)
I'm kinda turned on, just saying. LOL

[Frieda P]

Ha, glad you liked that part! I love your reviews Kee...thanks so much x

[Baby Ricochet]

I can do that

[Frieda P]

Have no doubts. ;-)

[quinfinn]

do you miss me that much? gosh, i am flabbergasted! awesome write! (i know it's about me...and don't give me grief, i gave you the highest score i give) really good poem, frieda.

[Frieda P]

Quin, you're worse than a chick, not supposed to kiss & tell.

[quinfinn]

there's the grief.....(drum roll) if you kissed elvis...wouldn't you tell?

[Frieda P]

If I kissed Elvis I'd be dead hon.

[quinfinn]

really? thank you, thank you very much.....

[Frieda P]

ha thought you might be one of those loons that knows where he's at....

[quinfinn]

he's in the bunk beside me....hiding out

[Frieda P]

ha I knew it! ;-)

[MOON]

Lovely write can be read in so many ways, elixir of another's essence , lovely word choice. Great write as usual Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your lovely review Moon.

[KAOlmsted]

I love this...I think we die-hards (and we know who we are) ;-) would need a rubber room if it weren't for this outlet. Great write, and an intense read. Awesome job.

[Frieda P]

Thanks k, I was just saying to someone that poetry keeps us from going batshit crazy...yep.

[KAOlmsted]

It's nearly 11 at night here, and I'm on WC...nearly midnight where you are and...well, here we be...(I'm off to bed, though...do behave badly while I am away) ;-)

[Frieda P]

I'll take over wrecking havoc for you, no problemo! ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

;-)

[Frieda P]

2:30 am still holding down the fort ;-/

[Antonio Valentino]

this was pretty sweet.. nice to see this other side.. must be q uite a guy.. ;)

this was edgy in its lovliness

:)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Antonio, but no guy does it like this for me. . ;-)

[Antonio Valentino]

and so we dream on, in words..

:)

[Frieda P]

dream a little dream.... ;-)

[Antonio Valentino]

Isley brothers?

[Antonio Valentino]

oops i meant Everly brothers..

[Frieda P]

nooooo no one's ever done it better than Mama Cass!

[Antonio Valentino]

i was thinking of this one..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YKn6h2x5IcY

[Frieda P]

nope....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5lfcqAvjmGQ

[Southern Cross]

I enjoyed twirling round and round with you in this piece. it had a momentum to it and different . I felt like a kid on the playground spinning till I got dizzy then lying down looking at the clouds.

[Frieda P]

So glad you enjoyed it, love your review, thanks!

[Annabelle Lee]

poetic insanity is the best kind

[Frieda P]

ha I've got a few of them, that's just the one I wrote about! ;-P

[Annabelle Lee]

Im not sure if i am insane or addicted. I need WC rehab.

[Frieda P]

There's no cure!!

[Annabelle Lee]

oh no!!!!

[Frieda P]

*smh*

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh those fires of untamed passion can burn for millions of miles just like the sun. No doubt it can make you insane in the membrane.

[Frieda P]

'insane in the membrane' ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is what I said ;)

[Sid]

Nice write, kind of sensuous you really have a way with word. Wish I could write provocative poetry like this....great write!

[Frieda P]

Actually I never did before the few I just recently wrote, people kicking my butt to move on past all the dark stuff. It's fun, but I'm sure there's still a few dark ones lurking about somewhere! Thanks so much sid.

[CS]

I love it when you beg... :)

[Frieda P]

Ha, thanks...I needed that laugh. :-D