Poetic Insanity

I'm dizzy with insanity

      clouds of butterflies

like swarms of locus

      airy like cloud 9 candy

feeling light and sinful

    invade my consciousness 

i am heady, lost the plot, but don't stop

     i go insane every time

you speak a poem or touch my name

    i twirl around in the spin of your tale

the elixir of another's essence

     throw down the gauntlet

release the kraken 

     dig in, fill me, drain me, devour me

no restraints nor empty spaces remain

    keep me wakeful with your endlessness

i surrender my loins to this moment

    lie next to me in the grassy soul of poetry

Reviews

[KeeD]

release the kraken !!!!!
:D wow such a provocative, creative and intelligent write :P "bites lower lip"
May you never mow that poetic lawn for it springs out flowers of words from far beyond any normal imagination, your creation gives life to my eyes and lifts me up to clearer skies where I can dream upon your clouds and express my feelings, shout them out loud. Frieda P, oh how you inspire me :)
I'm kinda turned on, just saying. LOL

[Frieda P]

Ha, glad you liked that part! I love your reviews Kee...thanks so much x

[carol burgess romance]

exciting choice of words...everone as there own poetic thumb print and I must say I do enjoying the way your words ebb and flow ....great read

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your kind words, I actually kind of like this one myself...much appreciate the visit...

[Tarry Franck]

OMG lady you have done it again and again. Sexy, sexy, sexy. I love it all!
Flawless

[Frieda P]

This made me laugh, I just noticed it....!! Love it. ;-)

[Sheila Kline]

Yes! It is an honor to claim "Poetic Insanity" - but most of all to join hearts and minds with those of like insanity! Where would the world be without the poet who expresses the hows and whys of life as no other can? I love this! The line, "the elixir of another's essense", and "i twirl around in the spin of your tale"...awesome!
And, the ending.............ah, one to surrender to!

[Frieda P]

Not only have I spun around, I think I spun upside down with a few of your hot tales sex lady! ;-)

[Dan p]

Written with such passion, inspiring. Well done!

[Frieda P]

So glad you enjoyed it. :-)

[Frieda P]

I guess we are all insane dear one... at least good insane ones can write poetry :D wonderful work love...

E.L.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Eli, yes, beautifully insane...aren't we all? ;-P

Exactly, it is the best way to reach art... :D

[Frieda P]

;-D

[AWickedMoon]

Awesome poem!

[Frieda P]

Oh, thanks, I actually kind of like this one myself. ;-)

[Kaylor Mason]

It's not coincidental that poets, writers and artists all make the most passionate lovers. We're known for that in the world's eyes :)

[Frieda P]

Is that your best pick up line? No wonder you're still a bachelor..;-P

[Kaylor Mason]

Oh you're hilarious. ha ha

[Frieda P]

Watch the link I sent on other thread, it's hysterical, and TRUE! haha smart professor..

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

Nice write :) Each line is really powerful and creates a strong image. I kind of imagine someone in a room with disco lights on and just twirling with their eyes closed. As if they're the only one on the floor, in the room. Poetry is their own sanctuary and only place to be.

[Frieda P]

Wooo, I'm looking for white polyester suit now, trip the light fantastic. Love this review, thanks!

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

I love white suits...there's just something about them that's interesting.

[Kandy]

What an arousing poem ;p. You get caught up in every word, every line. The whole piece is heavy with excitement, from beginning to end. Your use of words really creates an erotic atmosphere. Great Job!

[Frieda P]

Woo, I love this review, thanks so much....made my night! ;-)

[Kandy]

Your welcome ;)