Quintessence

I breathe you like

 fire and flowers

your sweet and burning essentia

you flow through me resolute

whilst my frenzied

 peak pulsates

your body eases into my being

it settles in

 crystal pools of clarity

seen through

 smoky salted tears

swells the

 unspoken tenderness 

you lavish me with abundances

bursts a 

symphony of exhalations

sun and moon

 rise simultaneous

lulled into effete

 paroxysm's embrace

I exhale the essence of your crest

Reviews

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

This is my kind of piece, it has jazz and sweetness, and I like how it hangs on the page!

I breathe you like fire and flowers
your sweet and burning essentia
you flow through me resolute

swells the unspoken tenderness
you lavish me with abundances

[Frieda P]

Thanks a friend of mine sent me that artwork with the exhale of flowers and smoke, asked me to write something for it, this was the result....

[kublakhan27]

Wow...you're on quite the prolific streak I'd say...every couple of days you're churning out something incredible...awesome :)

[Frieda P]

Oh my, the kiss of death! If you jinx me you're in big trouble! ha
Thanks k! ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha I never thought of that...one as insecure as myself should not be so careless with such words ;P It must have been the six--week-old head cold talking...I'm sure you'll be fine Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

When my muse has heart palpitations you know who's door I'm knocking on!! ;-) Hope you're feeling better my friend...

[kublakhan27]

Haha I'm like a politician...if all else fails, just blame me ;) I'm starting to wonder if Spring will be required to shake this bug...it just refuses to go quietly haha x_x

[Frieda P]

oh gawd, anything but a politician plz! That's akin to the grim reaper, but at least he's straightforward and honest! :-P

[kublakhan27]

Haha not that I was defending politicians by any means...I DO have more respect for the Reaper :)

[Frieda P]

:-D

[kublakhan27]

;D

[Lover Of Words]

I am lost for words except that this is awesome and quite beautiful!

[Frieda P]

Loss of words always means good for me, so thanks kindly friend! :-)

[Lover Of Words]

It comes out of the bowl of suger that i am SWEET! lol your welcome Dear friend ;-)

[Frieda P]

ha I'm sure it's all natural ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

Indeed it is! no fake stuff here ;-)

[KeeD]

"you lavish me with abundances
bursts a symphony of exhalations
sun and moon rise simultaneous"... WOW !
I love how it's calm but has all of this emotion packed into it.
Loved it Frieda P, as always you never disappoint.

[Frieda P]

I already knew you'd like it ;-)
Thanks Kee.

[Ahmad Cox]

Ah. Very beautiful and healing in its sweetness and serenity.

[Frieda P]

Sweetness and serenity, I like that, thanks Ahmad.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very spiritually soothing poem... it is like a multivitamin for the heart and soul.

[Frieda P]

ha I like that Dale! 'a multivitamin for the soul and heart' that belongs in a poem! thanks...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Hmmm, well maybe I will have to write one around that phrase.

[KAOlmsted]

Nice. I like the ending...it's sort of...now I can breathe and relax in a way. Like all of the emotion is drained...let's just lie here a while. Really good.

[Frieda P]

Thanks kimmer.

[KAOlmsted]

Always my pleasure, ma'am.

[s y e]

OOooooooooft. This is really greeat! Noodles loved it.

Well done my darlin' xox

[Frieda P]

ha there's my fav ooooft again. You'd love it if I recited 3 blind mice lovely girl. ;-) thanks you muchly! xo

[s y e]

Yip, i said 'oooooft' even although Noodle isnt hyper today....

Yeah, that is very true. You could write something like 'Hello and goodmorning WC' Id love it. LOLZA ;-) Welcome xox

[Frieda P]

LMAO you're too cute I could eat you for breakfast! ;-P

[s y e]

LOL, im not good cold. I prefer to be hot.....
that came out wrong *hides*

[quinfinn]

hmmm

[s y e]

LOL, why the hmmmm...?

[quinfinn]

oh, some things that make you go hmmm.... nyuk, nyuk, nyuk!!!!

[Frieda P]

Oh c'mon you have to gobble her up, she's so insanely adorable!!

[s y e]

Hahahaha, i love that word dude, 'nyuk' OMG too, funny!
Haha, think you have cheered noodles up!

[s y e]

Awww shucks Frieda *blushes*

[quinfinn]

i have no issues with gobbling up gorgeous women....at all

[Frieda P]

I only speak truths ;-)

[Frieda P]

....and sarcasm but that's not it! ;-P

[Frieda P]

ha, I had no doubts sir quin ;-)

[quinfinn]

just in case........

[s y e]

Yes Frieda, we all know you do sarcasm ;-) Hehehe. Your so cayoteeeeeee.
Guys, you havent seen my face. Lol. I could be an ugly geek with pimples (like Nanny MacPhee) for all you know.....
THATS NOT ME BTW just saying

[Frieda P]

in case what? somebody's brain dead? ;-P

[Frieda P]

We see your spirit that's what counts! OH, and your boobies too...ha

[s y e]

*palms face* My boobies, my dear did that REALLY have to be out there *blushes* Ah deary me.... What will I do with you?!

[quinfinn]

yes, very impressive bosom....

[s y e]

Aw right you two thats enough.....

[quinfinn]

you talkin to frieda and i or to your......never mind

[s y e]

Yes, you guys talkin bout my boobies.... Well, mainly Frieda, she started it lol. Lurve you Frieeedaaa

[quinfinn]

can i get a bong hit of that? we can use champagne. this is really good!

[Frieda P]

:-) I love this review, you put it such a way only the Quin could...thanks so much!

[quinfinn]

and you are welcome, so much!

[Frieda P]

;-)

[quinfinn]

i can name that tune in three notes....la, la, la