Suicide Senyru

Romancing Suicide

You write of edgy dying

then all the young girls will swoon

deception by death

Reviews

[Deron Alexis]

lol its tragic that people will cheapen their life in a way like that to get attention need a girl then living is the way to do that dying is just stupid for that reason however I won''t dismiss all suicidal tendencies as a pick up scheme some of us really hurt and should not be alone

[Frieda P]

Yep, I so agree, but to do the former is really destructive if you're young and impressionable reader....

[Rob Santana]

Well said Frieda. I like how you wrote romancing suicide. That's exactly what some are doing....sad

[Frieda P]

Very sad, there are a handful of young people on this board who glorify it, as if it were something spectacular redeeming light.. it's nothing but desperation and horrible pain as you well know. Hopefully, if they really need it, they'll get help before it's too late. Thanks for reading my friend.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Very welcome...if it helps one person I would be over the moon jazzed.

[Tarry Franck]

well said :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Tarry, had to be said. ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

I understand totally. Glad you did it :)

[Lina Grey]

necrophiliacs in the making...great. somehow, this reminds me of Twilight. lol but great write Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

so it seems, never did see Twilight, but thanks heaps! ;-)

[Lina Grey]

me neither, but with everyone in my school talking about it last year, i didn't really have to XP you're welcome :)

[Frieda P]

Yeah, I don't really get the whole dead is alive or whatever phenomenon. ;-)

[Jess]

It happens everytime.especially to those young people like me who are deeply inlove with someone but leave them just so easily,,but i'm not that type,,it's just that everything happens for a reason..''there's so many fish in the sea,why stay in one place?''suicide will never be a solution to a wounded heart...i love this short,but lovely poem

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly khicks, I knew you had more sense than that ;-)

[Butch Decatoria]

Love it love it ! Awesome write.

Ever try reversing the last line?? -- "Death by deception" ??
Just a thought.... Awesome tho' rare find...

[Frieda P]

Thanks, that's actually the way I originally wrote it, but this got my point across better I thought...

[KAOlmsted]

Did somebody piss in your Cheerios, girl? Where they at? You want I should rough them up for you? Nah...you already did. Good work, this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Death is the best deception. Can twist-up the tale and ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

You said a mouthful Coyote! Thanks my friend.

[LA Lorena]

there is no romance in suicide, you are right.

[Frieda P]

None whatsoever, thanks.

[Sheila Kline]

It might seem to be a good topic to discuss when people/friends get together, a "trendy thing", but it never is!! It is good you write of it to bring more discussion to it. Young girls are so easily impressed that one talks of it, and then another, and the one does it........TRAGIC!!

[Frieda P]

When one's life has been touched by this tragedy it sheds a whole new light. Thanks Sheila.