Old Fashioned Moves

 Dance me like I'm Ginger

and you're my Fred Astaire

old time Hollywood flair

Dance me in the moonlight

like old lovers used to do

twirl me while doves coo

Dance me slow, charm me off my feet

dance me so near

sing whispers softly in my ear

Dance me to the end of tomorrow's bliss

spin me lavish whilst I quake

then kiss me quick before I wake

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Dance me like I'm Ginger
and you're my Fred Astaire
an old-time Hollywood movie
full of glitz and flair

Dance me in the moonlight
like old lovers used to do
twirl me while white doves
look on and thrill us with their coo

Dance me slow, charm my feet
hold me oh so near
sing, whisper softly as we glide
sweet nothings in my ear

Dance me to tomorrow's light,
spin me lavish whilst I quake
then kiss me deeply upon my lips
before I can awake.

[Frieda P]

You trying to tell me something>! John ;P
That's how I had it set up originally,...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No simply dancing!

[Frieda P]

Even when you're subtle you're like a ton of bricks hon :P

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nooooooooooo just felt you were dancing solo!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

so took you for a spin.

[Frieda P]

Somehow I don't believe you lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok I am admonished!

[Frieda P]

Don't sulk, just tell me what you really think!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sulking is good!

[Frieda P]

You're such a little boy, but adorable. :-P

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I am what I am but adorable?

[quinfinn]

reread at your request, yep, still a fun poem!

[Frieda P]

haha just wanted to make sure you were paying attention! ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby

[David Scott]

Keep dreaming. Then wake and dance!
Great poem dear.

[Frieda P]

I will, you keep your shorts on! ;-)

[David Scott]

Then how will I ever dream? Ha

[Frieda P]

smh

[Ahmad Cox]

Somehow when I am reading this poem the dance sequence and the song to singing in the rain comes to mind.

[Frieda P]

That's a good one too, but i was thinking more 'romantic' and flowy. :-)

[Annabelle Lee]

Sometimes I fear that I was born in the wrong era. How I would have loved to attend balls and wear those gowns every day. Breaking the rules colonial style. I like to believe myself a tom boyish person, but something seems so attractive about that lifestyle.

Oh, great poem by the way

[Frieda P]

Like I said, no way you're 14! You are definitely an old soul, trapped in a young person's body, no doubt in my mind! Good place to be. :-)

[Annabelle Lee]

Aha. No if someone would just let me out we'd be goldn.

[Annabelle Lee]

Now
Golden

[Frieda P]

ha I think you're golden already kiddo :-)

[Annabelle Lee]

awww thanks

[InsanityWriter]

Love it. :) First stanza was my favorite!! (;

[Frieda P]

Thanks Skittles, it was a whimsical write. ;-)

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I like the celebration-urgency in this! It's very Cold War let's get busy feeling.

[Frieda P]

You do have such a way with words, kind sir! ;-)
Thanks

[Lover Of Words]

Lovely!

[Frieda P]

Danke, thanks, gracie! :-)

[C.C. Marx]

You skip from genre to subject every single poem, SLOW DOWN my mind can't process!!! Just kidding, beautifully done, I felt like Fred Astaire was dancing me around the room lol

[Frieda P]

woooo, great! ha, and welcome to my head! :-P

[C.C. Marx]

Interesting place....XD

[Frieda P]

ha be careful, I warned you! ;-)