Sky Writing

Sky writing subliminal messages

my love a fantasy of poppies

 

lilac scented clouds zephyr in

angels take juniper's spotlight

writing sonnets and love poems

on a seascape of lover's bliss

sailing by, an air balloon gusts

within it, secrets of lovers escape

I promised you lacy incandescence 

twinkling stars of rainbow's hue

Magical elixirs of destiny and fate

joined together in life and ever after

break out the bubbly for the event

gates of golden mesh are waiting

Reviews

[AYVID N]

The poem is full of fine ethereal imagery...
But Frieda...? I sense a foreboding ...in the last 4 lines...?
I am your cosmic twin remember? ;)

[Frieda P]

Ha you expose me my dear sister. ;-)

[LA Lorena]

Well, aren't we all light and airy and full of optimism! Nice one Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Ha, I can see you're shocked again! Thanks LA.

[khalid]

real love always has wings. those wings take the lovers to live in such a high place, in the sky because the feelings of love are too superior to live on earth. you have created those wings here..i felt im flying there..

[Frieda P]

Sweet review, thanks so much khalid...

[Aidz]

Silken in the breeze a prose of subtle make believe of love and other squishy stuff

nice write

[Frieda P]

ha 'makes believe' you're such the romantic!

[Carolann Dowsett]

So sweet and romantic, as usual a wonderful ride :)

[Frieda P]

ah the ride, great one.... ;-)
thanks!

[Carolann Dowsett]

:)

[Night]

...Frieda, you are such "The Romantic One"...very beautiful, very soft,,,very nice.:)

[Frieda P]

I have my moments. ;-)
Grazie...

[Night]

...lol. You're welcome.:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and sweet words led the reader to good places. I had to read again for the pleasure of the words and the positive feel of the thoughts. You create beautiful visions with this outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

woo double read, made my day! Thanks Coyote!

[Emerald Seas]

Reads like a fantasy!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Sera!

[Baby Ricochet]

Great

[Frieda P]

Thanks Baby.

[quinfinn]

hmm, head swimming in intrictely woven metaphor....somewhat surreal and lilting, yes, i would love to travel to this place...oh, just did! wonderful write!

[Frieda P]

That place is in my head, welcome any time. ;-)