Sky Writing

Sky writing subliminal messages

my love a fantasy of poppies

 

lilac scented clouds zephyr in

angels take juniper's spotlight

writing sonnets and love poems

on a seascape of lover's bliss

sailing by, an air balloon gusts

within it, secrets of lovers escape

I promised you lacy incandescence 

twinkling stars of rainbow's hue

Magical elixirs of destiny and fate

joined together in life and ever after

break out the bubbly for the event

gates of golden mesh are waiting

Reviews

[Tarry Franck]

Very lovely. You surprise me every time. Never know what to expect of you but I love that about you. Surprise, Surprise, Surprise. Leaves the readers wanting more.

[Frieda P]

haha, that made me laugh....I'd hate to be predictable ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

:)

[Frieda P]

:-D

[Deron Alexis]

very hopeful feeling here like something new is coming that expectation of what you wish would happen mixed emotion fear joy hope rally the sky will continue to capture man's (and woman's) imagination .

[Frieda P]

true, I should keep my head in the clouds more often...

[Mark Anthony Games (Hum..]

Youthful air to this one like dancing children in the first wave of love. Makes love sound like an Innocent adventure, we all no that's no longer the case, ha ha great job

[Frieda P]

haha, that's the darker side of poetry! thanks for reading me...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love will lift us up where we belong... nice to see some sappy and sweet words from you.

[Frieda P]

hahaha, what are you trying to say Dale? ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I am not saying anything... well I am saying something... wait what was the question again? :)

[Frieda P]

:-D

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

If I was standing near you I'd probably get a frying pan to the head :)

[Butch Decatoria]

I promised you lacy incandescence - wow...

[Frieda P]

I'll take that as you approve...thanks.

[Butch Decatoria]

yes, love it... you're welcome

[Annabelle Lee]

gorgeous! So a lot of your work has that dream like atmosphere... just something I realized. Bravo!

[Frieda P]

ha you trying to say my head's in the clouds? ;-)

thanks Annabelle!

[Annabelle Lee]

maybe i am haha

[Frieda P]

ha should I call you Pot from now on? ;-)

[Ahmad Cox]

Oh wow. That was amazing and surreal and beautiful at the same time.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Ahmad. :-)

[KAOlmsted]

*blink blink* What? Did you get laid or something? Not too shabby, sister ;-)

[Frieda P]

haha you do make me laugh so. ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

:-D

[Frieda P]

I swear the day just wouldn't be complete without a review from you! ;-D

[LA Lorena]

LMAO! Just saw this review. I thought it, but did not ask.

[Frieda P]

Since when are you afraid to say or ask? LOL

[LA Lorena]

who said I was afraid? I just prefer not to know, then I can pretend I'm not the only one who didn't get it.

[Frieda P]

LMAO!

[KAOlmsted]

I get laid all the time, so my poetry rarely reflects the banal ;-) Miss Frieda got her bell wrung it seems..............

[Frieda P]

Ding ding ding!

[Frieda P]

Kidding, I wish! ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

I'm going to Priceline right now, gonna book quin a flight to Joisey ;-)

[Frieda P]

LOL seriously, laughing out loud!

[KAOlmsted]

Sure, yuk it up, he'll be at the Newark Airport on Wednesday morning, Flight 216...bring bagels ;-)

[Frieda P]

hahaha of course bagels, but what else? ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

Now I want a bagel...god damn it.

[quinfinn]

don't forget the cream cheese....and some honey

[Frieda P]

No problem, we have exquisite pizza, whatcha pleasure?

[KAOlmsted]

Every time I see you, Frieda, I sing Leonard Cohen in my head "Woke up this morning...got myself a gun..." ;-)

[Frieda P]

OMG I love him....

[Frieda P]

A thousand kisses deep..wooooo

[KAOlmsted]

He is the proverbial s**t ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

OH! I just saw quin piped in :-D

[Frieda P]

he could 'dance me to the end of love' any day! ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

Hear that, quin ;-)

[Frieda P]

wait....you thinking Sopranos? LOL

[KAOlmsted]

*laugh* F**k yeah...no worries, I got some step uncles...one phone call...that's all I'm saying ;-)

[quinfinn]

she's talkin about leonard, not the quinster....and i like eggplant and cauliflower with cheddar cheese on my pizza

[KAOlmsted]

O.O eggplant and cheddar cheese?? wtf???

[quinfinn]

um hmmm

[Frieda P]

haha shoulda known the kimmer!

wtf kind of pizza topping is that??

[KAOlmsted]

;-)

[quinfinn]

rosa's at penn station, best pizza in new york

[Frieda P]

Who puts cauliflower on pizza, I think that much be against the law here or something....

[Frieda P]

silly new yawwkers

[KAOlmsted]

You fold, right? You gotta fold...

[quinfinn]

it's not crunchy, silly...they boil it in garlic sauce, awesome...just like mushrooms in consistency

[Frieda P]

I guess if we're tawkin garlic, perhaps.............

[KAOlmsted]

Hey! I'm from New York :-p

[Frieda P]

you're exempt from silly, silly :-P

[KAOlmsted]

XD I wish!

[s y e]

D'awwwww! This is lovely! Beautiful!
Well done!!



Math exam went well btw ;-)

[Frieda P]

Grazie noodleO :-)

[s y e]

Welcome! :-D

[InsanityWriter]

The imagery here is fantastical. ;) Great write!!

[Frieda P]

oooo like this review! thanks! ;-)