Tequila Tears

Adult rhyme

One tequila, two tequila,

                   three tequila, four

watch her as she hits the floor

her smooth exterior is sublime

her insides are but a rhyme

she soothes the beast with booze

what's she got to lose

tomorrow's just another day

tonight she'll be on her way

being whoever she wants to be

it's herself she begs to flee

Reviews

Well spelled feelings here of litteraly being carried drunken away almost... the pain that get's too hurtful, all is a numb for a while, as she chooses...
Very funny, witty and nicely done sweet Frieda :)

X E.L.

[quinfinn]

you know damn well i thought of shelly wests song "jose cuervo" after reading this! everyone one knows tequila is a certain hangover and a "lay down and let go " drink. very fun and cute write, hope you kept it down all night!

[Frieda P]

hmm depends on what you mean by down? ;-)

[quinfinn]

your tummy, silly

[Frieda P]

That's what she said. :D

[That_Girl]

*tomorrow's

Tequila is so yummy. :D Soothes a lot of things.

[Frieda P]

You ever eat the worm?

[That_Girl]

I have never done that, no. lol

[Frieda P]

good don't!!

[That_Girl]

I'd vomit... before the real effects even set in. xD

[Frieda P]

By the time you get to the bottle of the bottle you have no clue! lol

[That_Girl]

lol

[Frieda P]

I'd like to feed a certain someone a worm right now!!!

[That_Girl]

lol I don't understand some people.

[Frieda P]

I need to read some of his s**t, see what he's going on about....

[That_Girl]

I started one... the first... but I'm not in the mood lol

[Frieda P]

yeah it wasn't interesting enough Flakes to do it for me either

[Lover Of Words]

GREAT ONE!
:)

[Frieda P]

Cheers :-)

[Lover Of Words]

Right back at ya ;-)

[.]

A good one. :)

[Frieda P]

Thank you ;-)

[.]

You're welcome. : )

[Michael G.]

Bloody Marys will be needed in the morning.
Did she find what she was seeking/needing/wanting?

[Frieda P]

Nah, she never does. Bloody Mary's, why didn't I think of that?

[Michael G.]

Pity... though not surprising. Looking in a hard place. The Tequila clouded your visions of Bloody Marys.

[Frieda P]

Most likely, I should probably switch back to dirty martinis.

[Michael G.]

lol

[Frieda P]

:-)

[KeeD]

Wow :) not only was this a fun read it also had deep meaning to it.
Short, clean great flow, rhymed very well :) "You da' champ"

[Frieda P]

Just a wee bit o'fun! ;-)

[Chris]

thought-full

[Frieda P]

Thank you for reading me kind sir.