Your words are true in the poem.
"People come and go throughout our humble lives
some help us to rise above it all and leave us affected "
We are made by the teaching of parent and family. Good and bad they are part of us. Their voices and spirit live through our actions and our thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
Alot of people are affected by this beautiful meaning behind this poem I know for sure that i am This is a gourgous poem and i am glad i came acroos it Lovely work
I found this less "poetic" to my eye than I enjoy. Still, the words hold truths and carry a well spoken and kind sentiment. Felt more like a little speech... A morning pep talk of sorts...
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
A speech, how so?
11 Years Ago
The write did not ask a question or explore a new concept. You just emphasized a point that can have.. read moreThe write did not ask a question or explore a new concept. You just emphasized a point that can have no argument or debate. Thus all I can do is listen and nod... A speech. A fine one, but that is how it felt to me. I like something I can challenge or that challenges me. Is that more clear?
This piece made me reflect, one of your more serious pieces.
I read this and think of how I've come across so many people in life, some of them i've lost and how when I contiune to live with my life I come across these small memories that remind me of these people.. little things you know. Great write Frieda
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11 Years Ago
Yes, I do serious too my friend, the silly ones stand out in your head. ;-) Thanks, you're always s.. read moreYes, I do serious too my friend, the silly ones stand out in your head. ;-) Thanks, you're always so sweet. x
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..