Your words are true in the poem.
"People come and go throughout our humble lives
some help us to rise above it all and leave us affected "
We are made by the teaching of parent and family. Good and bad they are part of us. Their voices and spirit live through our actions and our thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
oh wow..you make me remember how many people i have met in this life, each of whom i thought we can never live without each other but due to life and its changes, we find ourselves departing and others appear in our lives to play the same role and still, this happens all the time we are living..
life's ups and downs are always stronger than our feelings and intentions..
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11 Years Ago
Sorry khalid, sometimes that's painful, thank you.
very straight forward writing for you Frieda lol if i were there i would check you for a fever XD true story though all of it every last word very relatable and really good comparisons and metaphors well captured well written well done :)
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11 Years Ago
Okay, that made me burst out laughing actually, hahaha, fever? :D
When another affects us this, they are never forgotten! Our heart may be affected by their presence in various ways - we may long for them and still seek them, we may change the way we live because of them, we may regard others through a different looking glass, and the list goes on. You have certainly touched my heart with your words!
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11 Years Ago
So true Shelia, I'm glad you were so touched, thanks.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..