Your words are true in the poem.
"People come and go throughout our humble lives
some help us to rise above it all and leave us affected "
We are made by the teaching of parent and family. Good and bad they are part of us. Their voices and spirit live through our actions and our thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
True words, put in so eloquently, this is a deep, profound poem and I love it. We all lose people important to us for some reason or the other and this is a piece anyone can relate to, it touches the heart...amazing write!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks so much sid, this got lost in the mix somehow, much appreciate this review. Someone touched .. read moreThanks so much sid, this got lost in the mix somehow, much appreciate this review. Someone touched my heart and then they were gone, thus this piece, glad you enjoyed it.
I really love this Frieda, this is a most eloquent poem of profound thought. Very nice!
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11 Years Ago
Thanks LA, this one is kind of special to me.
This really touched me, as we all lose some very close people once in our lives...
You discribe just with grace, what they have meant to us... goosebumps, only same souls can feel, those out of words.... I feel they not around us anymore hear you too! ;-)
This is just beautiful...very nicely said. And I had to smile because I'm working on a piece right this minute called Indelible ;-) Great minds love the same words to pieces.
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11 Years Ago
Thanks kimmmer, looking forward to reading it. Ditto, on the great minds! I still so want to peer in.. read moreThanks kimmmer, looking forward to reading it. Ditto, on the great minds! I still so want to peer into your mind. ;-)
11 Years Ago
You peer into it with every word I write, lady ;-) My pleasure, of course. I'll try to post it lat.. read moreYou peer into it with every word I write, lady ;-) My pleasure, of course. I'll try to post it later tonight and RR you. Thanks.
11 Years Ago
There's always 'something' we don't share, I want a closer look! ;-)
Geez girlfriend, you're gonna make me cry! thanks hon, you leave a lasting impression too sweet lad.. read moreGeez girlfriend, you're gonna make me cry! thanks hon, you leave a lasting impression too sweet lady.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..