B***h

B***h, you call me a bi_atch

like it's really my name

hard to tell if you love me

or abhor me

the truth is in your denial

playing in this sand box 

you think is love

gritty sex and all that jazz

luscious lips on the hips,

toned muscles does not a lover make

chug another beer, watch some porn

then expect me to perform

get out of my way so I can see

my way through to what it's really all about

maybe 2.5 kids, a dog and that picket fence

aren't looking half bad in the rear view mirror

Careful I had a bowl of b***h for breakfast

and that's Ms B***h to you. 

Author's Note

Wrote this after a discussion with a friend of mine about her frustrations.

Reviews

[Clockwork]

The last stanza comes with a big dash of sass and I like it. I think you show us how warped a Man's expectation for affection and sex can be. You nailed a lot of us at our worst when we can weigh a good woman down.

Favorite lines:

my way through to what it's really all about
maybe 2.5 kids, a dog and that picket fence
aren't looking half bad in the rear view mirror

That was great social commentary. It is well crafted and well put together.

[Frieda P]

Thanks C, was hoping it'd pack a punch. The last words, 'Ms b***h to you' are actually her own words, so yep she was hopping mad. Glad you enjoyed reading it.

[Clockwork]

Yes, I would say that it does. I like how you tied that in.

[Frieda P]

haha, well she's always saying she's at a loss for words but I always get an earful! Thought I'd give her a voice. She's gonna probably kill me when she reads it! lol

[Joseph Aldridge]

Haha Loved it! I really liked the ending. "Careful I had a bowl of b***h for breakfast and that's Ms. B***h to you!"

[Frieda P]

Thank you kindly, it was fun to write someone else's anger for a change!

[Joseph Aldridge]

Haha I enjoyed it.

[Frieda P]

:-)

[Sirius King]

lol love the ending :-)

[Frieda P]

true story :-)

[Sirius King]

ha! :-))

[Frieda P]

:-)