Baby Sis

Baby Sis

A Poem by Frieda P
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A tribute to Lee. x

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Something inside me died
      when you took your life
you took part of me
           with you too
something so precious
              it bleeds my heart
part of you baby sister 
still lives on
reminders and memories
 though photographs and music
butterflies  a blue hue
              will always bring you home
you float by me on occasion
              and lift my heart
your brilliance still shines
 in their absence
yet every day I yearn for a hug,
 a touch
a sisterly glance 
            that only we knew
you were an extension of me
my younger self
           personified
you were the best of me
of all of us
A painted picture
               in my head
  I pen you a tribute
to honor you with poetry 
Now tears of memories
                 remain and overflow
your vibrant spirit
                keeps me in check
until I can truly touch
                 your heart again
Always remember.....

'I love you to the moon and back'

© 2013 Frieda P


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The emotion is so palpable in this piece, I wept. You give a beautiful tribute to your sister hear, and you remember her in such beautiful and vivid terms. There is such sadness and loss here, such a deep well. Through that space, you have preserved a part of her, and you show us how wonderful she was.

You have a lot of strength to write and share this piece. It is inspiring. You have made a lot of things clear to me in your writing that I can apply to my own life as well. I think I finally understand a lesson that I did not grasp before.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Clockwork, you response brought tears to my eyes.



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That's really sad frieda. Beautiful tribute

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Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Baby, she was indeed beautiful.
you know..im deeply related to this. such unbearable feelings of losing someone dear to our hearts. it becomes worse when it is a sweet inocent angel. i live with this pain all the time since i lose my own new born kid as i expressed it in my writing(Lonely Lost Kid)..i really feel speechless..

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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Sorry khalid, I know...and I know full well the pain. Thanks for your thoughts.
Some hurts never heal in this lifetime...
I see a love that was a rare gift between sisters in this write.

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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

More than I could ever put into words David, she was like my daughter, my friend and my sister, I fe.. read more
I saw the title, and I didn't want to read it. Not because I didn't think it would be good, but because some days it is just so hard to see the people you care about hurt so much, and knowing that nothing you say can help ease or erase that pain.

A most beautiful tribute Frieda

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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I know exactly what you mean LA, and I love the fact that you read it anyway, much appreciated. Lee.. read more
...a beautiful tribute to your sister...I am so sorry for your loss, God bless you Frieda.

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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Danke Night, thanks for your kind words.
Night

11 Years Ago

...always:)
It's beautiful, dear, absolutely precious. A lovely tribute to who I am sure was an incredible woman.

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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Most incredible person I've known, she had the heart of an angel. She didn't have a mean bone in her.. read more
I lost two brothers to suicide. I joined war to find peace. I did. Hard to lose someone you loved and needed. Especially if they are younger and support to out-live you. I could feel the sadness and the lost in the sad poem. We must remember the people who left us too soon. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

So sorry Coyote, I can't imagine, one is overkill. I'm glad you found your peace..it shows in your .. read more
I'm pretty close to my little sister, I cant imagine writing something like this for her...it's painful to think about.

I feel love, sorrow, and hope in this poem

great tribute
great write!


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Serenus...much appreciated.
Sirius King

11 Years Ago

thanx for sharing :-)
There's nothing more tragic then to lose a sibling especially one that had
a great bond with one another. This is a beautifully written tribute to that bond.
As long as she remains in your heart, she will never be gone nor forgotten...

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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

No, never fogotten, she's always in my heart, yet so far.
Dream Weaver

11 Years Ago

:)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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