this is another incredible write, Frieda, wow! so descriptive of one's love for writing, dedication and loyalty "to their pen" (thoughts, fantasies.) this is very inspiring, lovely choice of words as well as rhyme. i prefer paper mate pencils myself tho. 100 to 100 -- thanks for sharing! :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thanks Barrie, needed something to go with Star's pen...I thought our union with our pen is everlast.. read moreThanks Barrie, needed something to go with Star's pen...I thought our union with our pen is everlasting so....we needed to marry them :-)
12 Years Ago
i think it's a lovely marriage. and you are verily welcomed :))
well please tell your friend Star that i really enjoyed this!
even though i use a laptop now, i certainly started out with the simple yet powerful pen and pad..
yes, no matter what, we can always rely on that, voice, of ours that pours through whatever writing implement it may be.. to help us gather our thoughts, to better understand the more innermost things, and to help us, and others as well, understand, cry with, fear, get mad at, or embrace and overcome, almost any obstacle
wow,
ok this is proper thinking out of the box!!
it is real great its more like my pen en paper poem!!
they are the patners to poem for life.
never gonna leave u and they let you tell whatever you wanna telll them!
real good stuff my friend!!
Very good read here we should all take this in stride to pen pen on. Nice in description and the the showing of relationship between you and your pen and creative stature. as always keep writing fellow writer. This is a great read here.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thanks so much kelvin, where'd we be without our pens eh? :-)
I have no clue for that's a thought i would rather keep hidden in the dark somewhere or under the ca.. read moreI have no clue for that's a thought i would rather keep hidden in the dark somewhere or under the carpet, hey i guess creative minds would find a way right
12 Years Ago
I'm sure we would, I don't know about you but when a thought hits me, no matter where I am, I have t.. read moreI'm sure we would, I don't know about you but when a thought hits me, no matter where I am, I have to jot it down. I've written on napkins in restaurants before. ;-)
12 Years Ago
hahahah yes i know what you're talking about because i hate to forget a good though or phrase so i k.. read morehahahah yes i know what you're talking about because i hate to forget a good though or phrase so i know what you mean anything to write on is fine with me till i can get somewhere to put it down
Pen on!!! a weapon of a future journalist like me..LOL:)..awesome Madam FP..very true...without pen,I can't write all my thoughts and ideas..,,,PEN is the key!
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thanks so much khicks, it's the only weapon we should need!
this is another incredible write, Frieda, wow! so descriptive of one's love for writing, dedication and loyalty "to their pen" (thoughts, fantasies.) this is very inspiring, lovely choice of words as well as rhyme. i prefer paper mate pencils myself tho. 100 to 100 -- thanks for sharing! :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thanks Barrie, needed something to go with Star's pen...I thought our union with our pen is everlast.. read moreThanks Barrie, needed something to go with Star's pen...I thought our union with our pen is everlasting so....we needed to marry them :-)
12 Years Ago
i think it's a lovely marriage. and you are verily welcomed :))
This is the kind of union that will never, ever let us down! We can take hold of that pen and have a great time and not have to worry about what it thinks about us, how we are dressed, what we say, or don't say.....it is all up to us!
A write that should inspire all of us to "Pen on"!
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
That's for sure, my friend did the artwork for this one too, although she's had a setback and couldn.. read moreThat's for sure, my friend did the artwork for this one too, although she's had a setback and couldn't paint, she used her 'pen'.
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..