Nothing So Costly

Nothing So Costly

A Poem by Frieda P
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Could relate to any issue but this is mine...

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Read between the lines

where indifference dwells
where vile ignorance lives
no fine line
 of love and hate
no black and white just ashen grey
apathy reigns
 in the detached mind
it's a  dying passion with no pulse
look around this poor world needs you
to care
 and give a goddamned shout
when injustice
 and decay are abounding
look the other way and all is lost and forgotten
no dignity
 in hiding behind a weak fortitude
your hidden solitude will reap no benefits 
one day 
this could be you or yours and you'll relate
then all the grey
 will seem an outrageous debate
it'll be too late, you turned your head and sympathies
the audacity
 of ignorance is it'll get you in the end
who'll have compassion for your plight when
 we're all dead

                              

© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
Child Sexual Abuse is the use of a child for sexual gratification by an older or more powerful person. The offender is usually an adult, but could also be a more powerful child. Both girls and boys are vulnerable, it happens all around us, in rich homes and poor homes. We either don't know this or refuse to see this ugly truth, statistics are ugly too. 40% of girls and 25% of boys below age 16 are victims of CSA. Be aware, because every child deserves to be safe. It is a crime punishable by law. The sound of silence is more deadly than you realize.

You can read this as social commentary or poetry, it's in your hands, I leave that up to the reader.

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You've been, and still are, an incredible battler, though there's a strong element of resignation in this one...mind you, that may simply be my own interpretation as one that spends a lot of time in that mindset...it almost becomes comfortable after a while, but I'm fortunate to have people around to snap me out of it when that happens...needless to say, you have some as well :) Anyways, I don't wanna get too gushy on you so I'll stop myself by telling you how much I like this...it's raw and honest...great work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

Wow thanks so much k...I feel defeated sometimes, not only for myself but for the countless others t.. read more
kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

It's easy to fall prey to that feeling...stay strong :)



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I wouldn't say ignorance... it's more along the lines of indifference which is basically worse... they know what's happening... they know it exists... they just let things be and not do anything... not feel or care about anything...

Overall, good one! ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

I think they go hand in hand, a deadly mix. thanks fiery! ;-)
"you turned your head and sympathies
the audacity of ignorance is it'll get you in the end
who'll have compassion for your plight when we're all dead"
People who molest children need to be marked. This is a serious crime. Laws need to be enforce to ensure the safety of all children. Thank you for the powerful poem that had a purpose. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much Coyote, I so agree! Mark them and put them away on torture island...
IGNORANCE''oh well,,a cause of one's misery,agony,and abusive actions done with the powerful people who are unmindful of it....BE EDUCATED!BE AWARE!thanks for sharing this to me Madam:)lets not wait before the stat.become worst!!all of us need fair treatment...we are all living in the same planet,,,,

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your kind review khicks.
Wow! That's some intense Writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

Thanks for reading Baby.
Hi Frieda, one cannot fail to hear your message. like most atrocities in this world many prefer to look the other way or keep themselves psychologically untainted by disbelieving. Well put together poem with a social message.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much John, maybe one day people will open their eyes eh?
i really enjoy your poems and love the fact that your are brave and ready to tell the world about your experiences so tht other people too do not fall victims of the same crime. that is such a big heart and i truelly admire you. GOD BLESS YOU IN ALL YOUR ENDEAVOURS.
anyway back to the poem, its such a powerful poem voicing the concern to stand and take action against the offenders. it is us to report these crimes done on the innocent kids...!! but not to jus shut up about it, caring less because it is not you in tht position..!!
real educative loved it!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

Not so brave really, nearly had a heart attack after posting this, felt all raw and exposed! lol but.. read more
very important case. i think the punishment must be doubled for those who do such crimes to save our angels. it happened just few days ago here close to me, an employee in a school abused a seven year kid at the school. the father went to school and killed both this employee and the school principal. i didnt feel he was criminal for doing that. i felt he had the right to do it because this is the fair punishment for such a crime.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

I hear you, this is a big problem, especially when it seems the abusers have more rights than the vi.. read more
khalid

12 Years Ago

my pleasure
Certain words stuck out and my brain immediately went to rape and sexual abuse. I have a hard time reading some of these (of yours), probably because they're well written and on target. Hits home. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

That honors me greatly since I know full well how that can affect a person, much appreciated Avy. x
You've been, and still are, an incredible battler, though there's a strong element of resignation in this one...mind you, that may simply be my own interpretation as one that spends a lot of time in that mindset...it almost becomes comfortable after a while, but I'm fortunate to have people around to snap me out of it when that happens...needless to say, you have some as well :) Anyways, I don't wanna get too gushy on you so I'll stop myself by telling you how much I like this...it's raw and honest...great work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

Wow thanks so much k...I feel defeated sometimes, not only for myself but for the countless others t.. read more
kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

It's easy to fall prey to that feeling...stay strong :)
Excellent poem. :) You've done a great job at getting your message across. This sort of thing happens all too often. :(

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

12 Years Ago

Yeah unfortunately it does Insanity, and those are only the ones we know about. thanks so much.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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