Why am I always compelled to read anything with the word 'coffee' in the title; I never touch the stuff! I think I'm trying to see if maybe I'm missing out on something. Like, maybe I missed the boat. But what you're saying here, in this Senryu, is, even though the effects of coffee give you some synthetic energy to start the day, it isn't enough to keep you going unless you consume more coffee? Vicious cycle, this. Then again, if I drank some coffee, I might get up from my desk and clean the kitchen...yeah, you can keep the coffee ;-)
Good work, by the way. Really clever write.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
No problem, I'll drink yours, what do you do drink for breakfast, besides sarcasm? ;-)
Why am I always compelled to read anything with the word 'coffee' in the title; I never touch the stuff! I think I'm trying to see if maybe I'm missing out on something. Like, maybe I missed the boat. But what you're saying here, in this Senryu, is, even though the effects of coffee give you some synthetic energy to start the day, it isn't enough to keep you going unless you consume more coffee? Vicious cycle, this. Then again, if I drank some coffee, I might get up from my desk and clean the kitchen...yeah, you can keep the coffee ;-)
Good work, by the way. Really clever write.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
No problem, I'll drink yours, what do you do drink for breakfast, besides sarcasm? ;-)
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