COFFEE Senyru

COFFEE Senyru

A Poem by Frieda P
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Caffeinated, of course.

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COFFEE!  Glorious! 

starts my day off the right way

then, it's all downhill


© 2013 Frieda P


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Why am I always compelled to read anything with the word 'coffee' in the title; I never touch the stuff! I think I'm trying to see if maybe I'm missing out on something. Like, maybe I missed the boat. But what you're saying here, in this Senryu, is, even though the effects of coffee give you some synthetic energy to start the day, it isn't enough to keep you going unless you consume more coffee? Vicious cycle, this. Then again, if I drank some coffee, I might get up from my desk and clean the kitchen...yeah, you can keep the coffee ;-)

Good work, by the way. Really clever write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

No problem, I'll drink yours, what do you do drink for breakfast, besides sarcasm? ;-)
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

Diet Dr Pepper...duh.

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That is why I drink coffee all day long. A fun senryu.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Not yet, which one?
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Ride The Wind
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Riding the wind there now... ;-)
I love Starbucks and your unique writes ... :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Khalil!
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome dear...:)
:-)

:-)

and

:-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha thanks thanks & thanks!
Distant horizons

11 Years Ago

:-)
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CS
That is precisely why I keep a pot of coffee on the entire day. I like to start my day off right as many times as possible.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Smart!!
Why am I always compelled to read anything with the word 'coffee' in the title; I never touch the stuff! I think I'm trying to see if maybe I'm missing out on something. Like, maybe I missed the boat. But what you're saying here, in this Senryu, is, even though the effects of coffee give you some synthetic energy to start the day, it isn't enough to keep you going unless you consume more coffee? Vicious cycle, this. Then again, if I drank some coffee, I might get up from my desk and clean the kitchen...yeah, you can keep the coffee ;-)

Good work, by the way. Really clever write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

No problem, I'll drink yours, what do you do drink for breakfast, besides sarcasm? ;-)
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

Diet Dr Pepper...duh.

:-D
OOOO, noodle loves coffee!!! < 3 LOL


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

s y e

11 Years Ago

Mmmmm, both? ;-) xo
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha why didn't I think of that, coffee ice cream is actually quite yummy x
s y e

11 Years Ago

Omg. It is!!!! ;-) xo
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PP
Stay high on Caffeine Frieda:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

No worries Tink!
PP

11 Years Ago

::)
Ha, Just drink more coffee!
Nice little senyru.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

What'cha think I'm doing? ;-)
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Going down hill is fun, if you have the right kind of sled or cart.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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