I Wonder

Are there jellytots in Heaven?

Do the stars not have a sense of humor

does the moon not hauntingly laugh at us

do rainbows add colors when we're asleep

do butterfly kisses leave an imprint on our soul

do flowers weep when they aren't picked

do flutterby's believe their own chaos theory

do balloons know they're floating messengers

does a baby's coo mean we're peculiar

does rain fall when we're not looking

does the wind wrap around the sky with hugs

do men actually believe it was Eve's fault

do the clouds mind when we fly through them

does a skyscraper loathe it's very existence

do oceans have a thousand secrets 

do mountains never tell a lie

do hearts actually break apart and bleed in sorrow

do children ever lose their sense of wonder,

                    must years always burn out our hunger

How high can angels actually fly?                                                   

I wonder...                                                                                                                            

Reviews

[AYVID N]

I agree with the very fabulous review here by Nicholas Bernard Rowe. It's mostly Eve's fault while they get away with murder.
Your sense of wonderment is amazingly beautiful here.Every line.

[Frieda P]

thanks Divya...it's always 'their' fault, the sooner they learn that, the better off they'll be. ha ;-)

[AYVID N]

:( I'm afraid that'll never happen and that apology will never come Frieda!

[Frieda P]

You might be right Divya but I'm as stubborn as they come and I won't give without a fight! ;-)

[AYVID N]

then we are two of a kind. never say die! faith is the key word here.

[LA Lorena]

I wonder about a lot of things too.................
I wonder if those cute boots I have my eye on are gonna go on sale?
do these shoes come in a size 9?
do you think the salesgirl will go red if I hold the shoes up to my ears and ask in my best serious tone " how do they look?"

Glad to see I am not the only one who wonders! ;)

Nice write Frieda. I like this lighter side of you too.

[Frieda P]

You just freakin like me, face it. ;-)
Gawd, how did I forget damn shoes?

[LA Lorena]

I also wonder how many cups of coffee it will take before you notice what I wrote in lines 4 and 5 of my review? ;)

[Frieda P]

Well doesn't everyone do that with Louboutin's? ;-)

[LA Lorena]

LMAO!

[khalid]

many things to wonder in our lives, i also wonder, where do you get all of those nice topics from?

[Frieda P]

Electric shock therapy. :-D

[khalid]

can you provide me with a wire of it?

[Frieda P]

Only if you promise to eat! :-P

[khalid]

if you invite me to avocado..

[Frieda P]

ha now that sound tempting...

[khalid]

sure it is tempting for me..

[Ambereen]

WOW ! Your "wonder" list is awesome !

[Frieda P]

WOW, I love your review! Thanks kindly.

[Sheila Kline]

Yes, we wonder much of life - of nature, of love, of creation, of philosophy, of why we are here, or why we should be there, and on, and on! I absolutely love the questions you pose!! And, I just want to reach up and catch those butterflies! I wonder..........if they would let me?
Lovely my sweet friend!!

[Frieda P]

Thanks for that lovely review Shelia :-)

[InsanityWriter]

Excellent questions. ;) Loved the last one! Great write. ^_^

[Frieda P]

I think I do do, thanks! ;-)

[DrD]

Now this, Frieda, this is absolutely your best EVER. It has every ingredient great poetry should have and is magnificent in its scope and pondering. A thousand kudos for this one.

Incidentally, check Genesis and find that when God instructed Adam not the eat the apple, Eve had not yet been created. How''s that for discrimination?

[Frieda P]

Oh gawd, that makes me even madder! And wow, thanks so much...I needed something quirky and light after that last one, feeling raw and naked...don't peek doc. Love this review....you made my night! :-)

[DrD]

Made your night? Not yet, dear.

[Frieda P]

Don't make me come there...

[David Scott]

Maybe your just so full of wonder that you have become wonderful?
The amazing never do cease to wonder dear Frieda.
A truly "wonderful" poem.

[Frieda P]

Should it worry me that we're getting along so well David, like the calm before the storm?! ;-) What I meant is, thanks so much.

[David Scott]

Well whatever it takes dear to get the wind blowing in the right direction. Ha. Can you feel the breeze?

[Frieda P]

hahaha, yeah right under my skirt you dirty boy! ;-) behave now.

[David Scott]

I was just hoping for a butterfly kiss on your cheek...;)
I'm a good boy I am... Doolittles very own brother. Posh! lol

[Frieda P]

Doolittle!? hahahaha

[s y e]

Nooo, see you! You make me jealous with this picture AND your amazing writing. Can I have part of your awesome writing brain? LOL. :P

This was beautifully written, as always. Such a lovely write.

[Frieda P]

Now that really made me laugh, it's like a fun house in there, with no fun, haha...house of mirrors perhaps. You do alright kiddo. :-) Thanks noodle-O ;-)

[s y e]

LOL. I want a bit of it. *bats eyelashes*
D'awwwww, thanks my dear! < 3 ;-)

[Frieda P]

You're pretty bat shyte crazy yourself but in a good way! ha

[s y e]

LOOLZA. You love me really!! xo

[Frieda P]

Oh flip flops, you know it kid! ha xo

[s y e]

Woopie! Got ya! Fandabbidousi! xo

[Frieda P]

Good thing I have urban dictionary to translate your language young lady! LOL :D

[s y e]

Hehehe. You love Noodles language :-) hehehe LOLZA! xo