I Wonder

Are there jellytots in Heaven?

Do the stars not have a sense of humor

does the moon not hauntingly laugh at us

do rainbows add colors when we're asleep

do butterfly kisses leave an imprint on our soul

do flowers weep when they aren't picked

do flutterby's believe their own chaos theory

do balloons know they're floating messengers

does a baby's coo mean we're peculiar

does rain fall when we're not looking

does the wind wrap around the sky with hugs

do men actually believe it was Eve's fault

do the clouds mind when we fly through them

does a skyscraper loathe it's very existence

do oceans have a thousand secrets 

do mountains never tell a lie

do hearts actually break apart and bleed in sorrow

do children ever lose their sense of wonder,

                    must years always burn out our hunger

How high can angels actually fly?                                                   

I wonder...                                                                                                                            

Reviews

[KeeD]

How high can angels actually fly?

I wonder...
so beautiful.. great write.
I loved each line was like a dose of perfect imagery and emotion

[Frieda P]

Lol Kee, I was wondering why is he asking me that, you went back quite a ways for this one...depends on what they've ingested on that day I think!...thanks so much ;-)

[Kajal Gulabani]

A wonderful wonder Frieda.. Imagery taken to another level.. Keep up the gud work babes..

[Frieda P]

Thanks Kajl, working on it, don't we always? ;-)

[fiery-san]

A whimsical piece I must say... it make feel all imaginative for some reason. ^_^

[Frieda P]

I wonder why? ;-) Thanks!

[Lina Grey]

yes, children, do. but nothing lost cannot be found, and starved years feel no pain. Feed it, and it will grow. Curiousity can come back to bless us, and angels fly low to free us. a wonderful write, milady. Love your wondering mind :)

[Frieda P]

Why thank you for that lovely review, much appreciated. :-)

[Lina Grey]

my pleasure :)

[Lover Of Words]

No one knows how high they can fly i ask myself that question... This poem surely does make you wonder

Great Job as always Frieda

[Frieda P]

Thank you as always Kelsey :-)

[Lover Of Words]

My greatest pleasure! :)

[Ahmad Cox]

I have to admit I absolutely love this poem. It made me happy in my heart and put a smile on my face.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Ahmad, I kind of like this myself! :-)

[Jess]

100/100% awesome!!!!i loved this poem very much:)but theres one person i knew behind all of this,,,,,its HIM!!!!

[Frieda P]

Woooo that's really sweet of you khicks, muchly appreciated! :-)

[ms. barrie]

eloquently gorgeous write in both imagery, and flow. this is ah-mazing, Frieda :) -- thanks for sharing!

[Frieda P]

Awh thanks Barrie, muchly appreciated! :-)

[ms. barrie]

you welcome Frieda, as always this was a pleasure to read :)

[Sirius King]

do rainbows add colors when we're asleep
do flowers weep when they aren't picked

great questions
great write!

[Frieda P]

oh thanks so much, I thought everyone wondered those questions :-)

[Sirius King]

if not, they will now :-)

[Frieda P]

hahah maybe...

[Sirius King]

:-))

[Carolann Dowsett]

The mysteries of life and how they make us wonder. Very thought provoking. Great write.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Carolann, much appreciated.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)