This poem is like flipping through an old photo album..... when they weren't digital!! lol About half of your poem stunned me in short little staccato jabs. I stopped by my mom's house, just a half hour ago, and she gave me pictures of me when I was young. Knowing everything I saw, felt, and did when I was little made it tough at first to see the pictures. I don't remember "me", but I remember the anger, the darkness that was all-to-consuming, and the feeling I was always being watched due to the night terrors!! Your poem has a unique way of reminding me of how surrealistic my youth was in my head, and how others may have viewed me. The last line sums up what we all have in common.... the present. Everything else is a memory. I'm glad you wrote this and was able to, first: see your page, and second: enjoy more of you... after writing you last, this morning before work!! xoxo -Mark
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11 Years Ago
Wow, I had no idea I did all of that to you, should I apologize or say thanks? I'm not sure! ;-) xo
11 Years Ago
The day you find the need to apologize, might be the day that me being on your friend list means ver.. read moreThe day you find the need to apologize, might be the day that me being on your friend list means very little. THAT doesn't feel so..... xoxo -Mark
How do you do it, write one masterpiece after the other. Pierced said it so well, it's like flipping through an old photo album.
"perky pretty ponies play pool
sinfully sad sinister street sloths" your creativity is outstanding!
I wish I could write half as good as you. Freida are you published?
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11 Years Ago
I sold my soul to the devil ;-)
You are good, who you kidding dahling?
What a vast yet intimate glimpse into the lines and letters that fill our poetic pages every day... the fragments and shards of thought that form the tapestry of our lives. Profoundly moving and brilliant!
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11 Years Ago
Love, love your review, but I want to know, were you barefoot when you read this? ;-) Thanks so muc.. read moreLove, love your review, but I want to know, were you barefoot when you read this? ;-) Thanks so much!
11 Years Ago
Ummm... errrrr... well, I did have my socks knocked off, so yes! :D
''we are the master of our soul,the captain of our fate'' so many roads to take,so many choices to make,but we are ,where we are,,we are here because we choose to be here!regrets is not an option,,because life is a long journey,,,,there will always be a destination ahead of us...thanks Madam F..you take me to a journey:)awesome!!
If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..