Dine Me

Woo me, entice me

Wine me, dine me

Turn my insides to mush

Seduce me as your temptress

Make those butterflies flutter

Turn me inside out, devour my soul

Make me shudder like no other

Cultivate my womanhood softly 

Extract from me what you must

Lull me gingerly into trusting lust

Slowly bend me back to see the stars

Gently tap into those vibrancy bundles

Take me to the next level of Ecstasy

Galaxy's explode and I believe in God

Basked afterglow cause for suspicion

Then kiss me tenderly whilst you bid adieu

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

We struggle with the old "love them and leave them" dilemma, and you remind us how vexing it is! You are ripe and ready to be plucked, and then you get tapped on those vibrancy bundles and what do you have in the end but one who bids adieu! Thanks for the reminder of "come on in and don't forget to close the door when you leave"....lol

[Frieda P]

You got it Shelia...I wish I were so bold to do the same sometimes!

[kublakhan27]

I'd be in no hurry to bid adieu to this voice...next time I'm laying in bed and looking out at the stars, I'm gonna make a wish that some woman materializes at the edge of my bed and recites this...vibrancy bundles? ;D

[Frieda P]

haha, I think you're making fun at me k! ;-P

[kublakhan27]

Oh I couldn't be more serious, trust me ;)

[Frieda P]

hell's bells ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Indeed ;)

[Frieda P]

lol :P

[DrD]

Will you respect me in the morning? An old theme but presented here with a new and quite intimate touch that I found delightful.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hey I agree with La Lorena on this one!

[KAOlmsted]

Very sexy, lady ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice

[khalid]

unfortunately..i have just read your other poem baby sis...im still under its effect..

[David Scott]

I hope this was not on the first date! ha
Actually a very fine poetic dinner. Satisfied well I think.

[LA Lorena]

Beautiful Frieda. A very sexy write from your most prolific pen.

Why are you kicking him out so soon? It's especially good warmed up the next day for breakfast! ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. New world forgot the days when a man earn the right to love a woman. A wise man must dine, take his woman dancing and whisper she is beautiful and his only desire. Great reward for a man when she open those secret doors. I like the complete poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Night]

...wow," Make me shudder like no other "...steamy and playful...:)

[Frieda P]

ha calm down big boy, and thank you muchly ;-)

[Night]

you're welcome...lol.:)