Dine Me

Woo me, entice me

Wine me, dine me

Turn my insides to mush

Seduce me as your temptress

Make those butterflies flutter

Turn me inside out, devour my soul

Make me shudder like no other

Cultivate my womanhood softly 

Extract from me what you must

Lull me gingerly into trusting lust

Slowly bend me back to see the stars

Gently tap into those vibrancy bundles

Take me to the next level of Ecstasy

Galaxy's explode and I believe in God

Basked afterglow cause for suspicion

Then kiss me tenderly whilst you bid adieu

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

We struggle with the old "love them and leave them" dilemma, and you remind us how vexing it is! You are ripe and ready to be plucked, and then you get tapped on those vibrancy bundles and what do you have in the end but one who bids adieu! Thanks for the reminder of "come on in and don't forget to close the door when you leave"....lol

[Frieda P]

You got it Shelia...I wish I were so bold to do the same sometimes!

[Lover Of Words]

Love it

What am i say i love everything you write!
:)

[Frieda P]

Wow, I'm humbled, thanks so much!

[Lover Of Words]

It is my greatest Pleasure!

[Jess]

woah!!!nice one:)my imagination works!!LOL:) what a seductive words,,,,,thanks for sharing Madam F...

[Frieda P]

haha 'woah'...you're funny. I'm liking 'Madam F' might make that my pen name :-) Thanks!

[InsanityWriter]

Lovely poem. :)

[Frieda P]

Danke :-)

[KeeD]

Cultivate my womanhood softly - My, My :P Would I ever love the opportunity :P.
That's a good date right there. In the words of Frieda P,
If I get to choose

the way I get to expire

DEATH BY ORGASM!!

:D

[Frieda P]

You, my boy are naughty...I think I may have to punish you for that lol
:D

[Ahmad Cox]

I loved this poem and the sensual nature but also how you end makes the overall message very clear.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Ahmad, I'm not sure some people read it as you have.

[Carolann Dowsett]

The old age trick of being lured into bed just to be left high and dry after. A great write brings this clearly to the surface of the readers mind.

[Frieda P]

Yep, that one. ;-)
Thanks so much Carolann.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Tarry Franck]

This was great. Love it.

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Tarry :-)

[quinfinn]

afterglow? you know about afterglow? apparently you have been satisfied by a knowledgeable partner! awesome write kiddo! i love every line of this...

[Frieda P]

Quin, you do realize you're not the only 'one' out there that knows how to satisfy...lol

[Claire Twinn]

A woman ripe for plucking- how can he resist? Only a fool would.