Crash Sight

Chasing demons through

 rush hour traffic

outcast on the road of epiphany 

life support crashed

 the blinking lights

zooming 

high speed through stop signs

stalled

 on median's intersection

top down

 and people all stare

flip them the bird

 and blare the blues

take off for 

Hollywood and Vine

boulevard of dreams and denial

swerved 

down one way street

accelerating the opposite way

crash site

 a  haunting revelation

'objects in rear view mirror may appear larger'

Reviews

[khalid]

for me, i donno how i get safe after every drive. i think we are not ourselves when we drive. most of the times we drive crazily although we dont like it when others do! there is a saying here..drive slowly to arrive fast..i believe in it although im not always following it..
very nicely penned as always..

[Frieda P]

Who are you then khalid? Thanks ;-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Stop flashing your tits in the mirror then! lol
Nice piece with great metaphors my lady

[Frieda P]

Ha, if only. You know I'll get you for that. Thanks! ;-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oops I am in trouble now!

[Frieda P]

New Year, new fight. :-P

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A woman's scor, hell!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

scorn even!

[Frieda P]

Hey, you guys ask for it!

[Ahmad Cox]

I feel like this on the road sometimes.

[Frieda P]

My condolences. Thanks ;-)