Crash Sight

Chasing demons through

 rush hour traffic

outcast on the road of epiphany 

life support crashed

 the blinking lights

zooming 

high speed through stop signs

stalled

 on median's intersection

top down

 and people all stare

flip them the bird

 and blare the blues

take off for 

Hollywood and Vine

boulevard of dreams and denial

swerved 

down one way street

accelerating the opposite way

crash site

 a  haunting revelation

'objects in rear view mirror may appear larger'

Reviews

[khalid]

for me, i donno how i get safe after every drive. i think we are not ourselves when we drive. most of the times we drive crazily although we dont like it when others do! there is a saying here..drive slowly to arrive fast..i believe in it although im not always following it..
very nicely penned as always..

[Frieda P]

Who are you then khalid? Thanks ;-)

[fiery-san]

Interesting. Chillingly descriptive. Good job! ^_^

[Frieda P]

Thanks, so glad you liked it. :-)

[Tarry Franck]

Haunting ~~ Great work :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Tarry. :-)

[DrD]

Living with wreckless abandonment certainly is one way and it speaks of adventure and risk taking and excitement. And then there's the wonder of growing grey in an old farmhouse on the prairie. . . . it's all about picking and choosing.

[Frieda P]

Well I don't want to live on little house on the prairie, and the 'reckless' might get me in heaps of trouble, is there a middle ground? ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

Sounds like a road trip with kimmer ;-) Good stuff, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Kind of like Thelma & Louise on crack ;-)
Thanks you muchly...

[Frieda P]

The apocalyps, of denial, ow Frieda, you're a genious.....
What I can say more, loved this xx

[Frieda P]

Oooooft, love this review. ;-)

[Acron 4]

scary poem.........really good......thanks for sharing

[Frieda P]

Didn't mean to scare ya Ron. ;-)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Chilling! Wow.........awesome Frieda :)

[Frieda P]

thanks Neva!

[Robin]

Picking on Cali again ?

[Frieda P]

Like Cali for ni a?

[Robin]

the state all love to hate

[Frieda P]

No, my state of mind...hey my son lives in LA.

[Robin]

easy to get lost on those cloverleafs

[Frieda P]

The one's in my head, YES!

[Robin]

Poetry

[InsanityWriter]

Very nice. (:

[Frieda P]

Thanks Insanity :-)

[KeeD]

Wow, I could just picture a really tragic mess.. a brutal accident and I could feel the rush, fear, realism and totality of the situation as if I was behind the wheel. Great job Misses F.P < 3

[Frieda P]

Thanks Kee, always a pleasure for you to read me.