First Breath

New Life, New Year Senryu ....

A newborn baby cries

The circle of life unfolds

Angels take a bow

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. Children create hope and purpose. Thank you for the excellent poem,.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

thanks Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

As you should too ~~ such a great writer you most certainly are. This carries such beauty!

[Frieda P]

Thank you Tarry

[DrD]

Indeed they do . . . .

[Frieda P]

Agreed....

[KAOlmsted]

Nice.

[Frieda P]

:-)

[john alan willox]

and the circle revolves - very nice

john

[Frieda P]

Thanks john

[soliloquy]

Short, sweet.,....and so very true!

[Frieda P]

thanks solioquy, love those angels :-)

[soliloquy]

Me too. Thanks for pointing that out. Very original.

[Frieda P]

They brought a soft smile to my heart. :-)

[DIVYA]

...And then the cruel nanny takes over!

[Frieda P]

Aren't we in a spunky mood!? ;-)

[DIVYA]

:)

[Ahmad Cox]

Very pretty and dreamlike. This was very beautiful.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Ahmad, think it's a good start for New Year, enjoy yours!

[fiery-san]

Lovely. Simply beautiful. Such simple and small words yet the portray and impress upon the value of one life, of one child. So it is quite painful to find abortions and abandoned children in our world today. Good piece. ^_^

[Frieda P]

Thanks fiery, glad you like it. :-)