STFU

 We  extend ourselves to others and give them a little piece of ourselves, when they betray us, we die a little death each time. Everybody knows that it's a rotten deal. There will always be a new dawn, or will there?  Fish fly, why can't I?  My mind does a slow burn whilst you cut me to pieces, my logic explodes to a frenzied dance.  You cut me off at the knees, who are you to judge?  There is room for all opinions and beliefs, the world wasn't created in your right to rip to shreds my dignity. You assault my senses and knock my psyche into that parallel universe, hopefuly you do not exist in that place.  Locked away in that miniscule brain of yours must be some compassion or am I wrong again sir?  Please, stay stuck in your quagmire of absolutes and blindness, if that's the best you can do.  Time will make you a slave to your abhorrent spewing, literally picked off one by one, who'll be left? ...  The sun only shines so long, then the darkness takes over. 

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

sorry for lame review, my brain took a vacation and left no calling card. all i am going to say is: your writings never ceases to amaze me. will leave a better review when i'm better able to concentrate. incredible write, one that all can relate to. keep penning on. happy new year 13' :)

[Frieda P]

Haha, you picked the right one to read for the frame of mind that you're in Barrie! Maybe try the angel one, it's much more calming. ;-)

[ms. barrie]

yeah i can very much relate to this LOL! yes i read the title and said, "sounds about right" -- actually been trying to print stuff out and the printer is being a d_k! yes i have enough paper and ink in it, just wants to fight with me. also SLOWLY becoming inspired for that intense, dark, erotic love poem. thankful for that Dracula soundtrack and the eye candy under my photos. maybe a cat-nap will do me good? be well and take care, Joisey girl xoxo

[LA Lorena]

hey, I missed this! who or what p'd off my friend? Lemme attem!

[Frieda P]

ha I missed this as well, couldn't wait around for you, so I had to exterminate them all by myself, t'was more fun than a barrel of squirrel monkeys ;-)

[quinfinn]

wow, who peed in your cornflakes? this is an exquisite rant!

[Frieda P]

ya see what I mean now hon? ;-)

[quinfinn]

oh, i saw all along......i just wear blinders sometimes

[Frieda P]

hence some of your poetry and are you calling me a bi_atch? ;-)

[quinfinn]

never....get real...i don't even think of you that way, much less speak it.

[Frieda P]

I know, I was kidding with ya xo

[quinfinn]

aw, shucks....i know

[Frieda P]

:-)

[nigrum homonculus]

i got angry reading that. some serious slamming going on there. i loved it! one of the best i have read in a while

[Frieda P]

hey thanks PhilGod, could you beat the s**t out of this guy for me while you're pissed off please?!

[nigrum homonculus]

SURE! if he's 6ft though i'm gonna have to kick him in the meat and 2 veg and run

[Frieda P]

I'll get ya a step stool

[nigrum homonculus]

always wanted one of those....

[KeeD]

Frieda P knows what's up. You tell them, boss lady! < 3 great write. I like your word choice like "quagmire of absolutes and blindness" very well written. Power packed. Good job!

[Frieda P]

ha, you'd love me if I spit, which I don't by the way ;-)
Thanks love x

[Baby Ricochet]

Heavy duty s**t lady,

[Frieda P]

You should see me when I'm really pissed, I could probably bench press you Baby ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

I wouldn't doubt it

[Frieda P]

;-) Takes a lot to get me to that place...

[soliloquy]

You are a skilled poet. Too many try to be poets but aren't. You are a good one.

[Frieda P]

Thanks, you're really too kind x