Liar, Liar Senyru

Liar, Liar Senyru

A Poem by Frieda P

Don't say you love me

we have only lust begun

pants caught on fire! 

© 2012 Frieda P


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I don't have a FB anymore... but I still see stuff from creeping on my friend's account ( >:) ) and it's INSANE watching all these 17 year olds date for a week and then make statuses about how in love they are. B***h, please...

Anyways, I love it. :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That_Girl

11 Years Ago

Hahaha sorry. At least you turned out well... and I've seen Teen Mom.... I doubt you were ever like .. read more
KeeD

11 Years Ago

i'd make an awesome teen mom, i love icecream.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

hahah, just caught this, yep that's all there is to it 'ice cream, you scream, we all scream for ice.. read more



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I don't have a FB anymore... but I still see stuff from creeping on my friend's account ( >:) ) and it's INSANE watching all these 17 year olds date for a week and then make statuses about how in love they are. B***h, please...

Anyways, I love it. :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That_Girl

11 Years Ago

Hahaha sorry. At least you turned out well... and I've seen Teen Mom.... I doubt you were ever like .. read more
KeeD

11 Years Ago

i'd make an awesome teen mom, i love icecream.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

hahah, just caught this, yep that's all there is to it 'ice cream, you scream, we all scream for ice.. read more
so cleverly written! Hate those fakes who say they love you on the first date!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AYVID N

11 Years Ago

I agree! ;)
PP

11 Years Ago

wow this is getting fierier!!! Loving it
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Peter, was the only man willing to commit lol
'Don't say you love me'

that's right, love needs time it is lust that starts everything off. tell it as it is lol!!!!fantastic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

thanks ;-)
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PP
hahahaha Frieda I love this straight talking fiery piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

hahaha, thanks I kinda liked this one myself too!
PP

11 Years Ago

Awesome:)))

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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