Liar, Liar Senyru

Liar, Liar Senyru

A Poem by Frieda P

Don't say you love me

we have only lust begun

pants caught on fire! 

© 2012 Frieda P


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I don't have a FB anymore... but I still see stuff from creeping on my friend's account ( >:) ) and it's INSANE watching all these 17 year olds date for a week and then make statuses about how in love they are. B***h, please...

Anyways, I love it. :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That_Girl

11 Years Ago

Hahaha sorry. At least you turned out well... and I've seen Teen Mom.... I doubt you were ever like .. read more
KeeD

11 Years Ago

i'd make an awesome teen mom, i love icecream.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

hahah, just caught this, yep that's all there is to it 'ice cream, you scream, we all scream for ice.. read more



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And oh how quickly it all goes up in smoke!! Talk is cheap, results are lasting.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Love this Frieda. Sometimes, just sometimes it happens, I know because I am there for the first time in my adult life. S**t did I say adult? No way I am not having that.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh, dear John, you're letting your true colors slip. ;-)
You got to wonder bout those who jump the gun in saying those words... either they are up to something or just one who just likes the idea of being in love, either way a dangerous thing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


So good and soooo true! Well done girl!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks, I figured a lot of people could relate to this one!
s y e

11 Years Ago

Yes they can! Amazing! :-)
Just sang that entire last bit from Paradise By the Dashboard Light at the top of my lungs...Morgan gave me a standing ovation--suck up. She wants another Monster High doll. Meanwhile, this is such a simple truth. If you want sex, just say you want sex. Chances are...we do, too ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Yeah, I saw it too, hahaha ;-)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You know you can't get away with s**t on WC! ;-)
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

The live feed will always get you!
this is very good, and so true.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks LA
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Paradise By The Dashboard lights, that cracks me up... now the song is stuck in my head.
Nice. (: Very true.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks and yep ;-)
Hahaha oh my! I know at least a dozen boys whose pants would catch aflame from uttering those words, those little lying b******s. Strange how unmeaningful those words are to them. Nice piece :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL ;-)
Not sure how to react on the bitter truth of my race! :P
The humour is great and on-spot!
Nicely exposed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Honest response is appreciated! ;-)
thanks..............

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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