Liar, Liar Senyru

Don't say you love me

we have only lust begun

pants caught on fire! 

Reviews

[That_Girl]

I don't have a FB anymore... but I still see stuff from creeping on my friend's account ( >:) ) and it's INSANE watching all these 17 year olds date for a week and then make statuses about how in love they are. B***h, please...

Anyways, I love it. :D

[Frieda P]

hey when you're 17 it's acceptable, it's when they try to pull your leg, or whatever that it sucks! ;-)

[That_Girl]

As if every 17 year old boy is looking for ANYTHING but sex... that's all they want... it's how we have so many teenage pregnancies. ;) Silly gullible girls. ;p

[Frieda P]

hey watch it lady, I was one of those 'gullible girls'!! ;P

[That_Girl]

Hahaha sorry. At least you turned out well... and I've seen Teen Mom.... I doubt you were ever like any of them.

[KeeD]

i'd make an awesome teen mom, i love icecream.

[Frieda P]

hahah, just caught this, yep that's all there is to it 'ice cream, you scream, we all scream for ice cream'!! ;-)

[David Scott]

Well... Is it a lie if the fool believes what he is saying? Do we burn the poets pages because they have wet ink upon them? Do we live in the shallows because we fear to plunge into the suffocating depths of the unknown and in proven space where we have not yet learned to breath? Hum...?
I think my pants have been unjustly set afire, yet my heart is thankfully far removed and still intact. ;-)
Loved the poem! A trip into childish taunting for me. We never do grow up...

[Frieda P]

I highly doubt the 'fool' was serious, he was speaking 'testoserone'...I'm sure you've probably utter a few words her and there yourself at times. I love your review by the way...we never grow up, nor should we.

[David Scott]

:X

[fiery-san]

Once again, I've learned a new style... Senryu huh... you'd think after my Japan fanatic phase I'd at least come across that one... but yeah, lust is not love... it's passion but not right there yet... so I really don't get it when people spend a short time together and develop a sexual attraction to each other and immediately label thing love... really now. Anyways... nice senryu. ^_^

[Frieda P]

Nice mini rant ;-)
And thank you muchly fiery

[KeeD]

But I wanna say it Frieda P, I really , really wanna! xD fun senyru.
@LA, she's definitely turning Japanese. Look at the amount of senyrus and haiku's she has up :P

[LA Lorena]

SEE! I rest my case!

[DrD]

I love you! I love you! See? Not even smoke.

[KeeD]

haha probably the best review to this :P ^

[Frieda P]

You be quiet dark ninja! And doc, check yourself, maybe you've blown a switch or something. ;-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of statements. Love take time. Easy to say. Hard to really mean and understand. Thank you for the excellent poem. I did like the ending.
Coyote

[Baby Ricochet]

Ha! Good one!

[Tree]

Humorous little piece, Frieda. We must be wary of the ones who say those words too quickly.

[Frieda P]

NOW you tell me Diego... ;-)
Thanks

[Tree]

:/

[kublakhan27]

A tantalizing bit of wordplay...it almost makes me want to get caught in the lie ;)

[quinfinn]

had to read this three times before i noticed that you were saying lust begun and not just begun...funny how the mind reads what it wants to see sometimes...clever write

[Frieda P]

I was wondering how many people would skim by that one. ;-)
Thanks quinn x

[rnuff]

Right to the frakin' point, love this.

[Frieda P]

I take it, you get it! Thanks muchly...